Herr Korbes
by Brothers Grimm · from Household Tales
Adapted Version
One day, Cock made a little cart. "Let us go on a trip!" he said. Hen sat in the cart. "Yes!" said Hen. "Let us go!" Off they went. They went down the road. They went to the house of Herr Korbes.
Then they met Cat. "Can I come too?" said Cat. "Yes!" said Cock. So Cat jumped in the cart. Off they went.
Then they met Egg. "Can I come too?" said Egg. "Yes!" said Cock. So Egg rolled into the cart. Off they went. Then they met Duck. "Can I come too?" said Duck. "Yes!" said Cock. So Duck hopped in the cart. Off they went. Then they met Pin. "Can I come too?" said Pin. "Yes!" said Cock. So Pin came too. Then they met Big Stone. Big Stone was very big and round. "Can I come too?" said Big Stone. "Yes!" said Cock. So Big Stone rolled in too.
The cart was very full now! But off they went.
They came to the house of Herr Korbes. But Herr Korbes was not home. "What do we do?" said Hen. "We hide!" said Cock.
Cat sat by the fire. Duck sat by the water. Egg hid in a towel. Pin hid in a chair. Big Stone sat on top of the door. Cock and Hen sat up high. They all sat very still.
Then Herr Korbes came home. He was very tired. He went to the fire.
Cat jumped up. Ashes went POOF in his face! "Oh no!" said Herr Korbes. He could not see! His face was all gray.
He went to wash his face. SPLASH! Duck threw water on him! "What is this!" said Herr Korbes. He was all wet now.
He took the towel. CRACK! Egg broke on his face. What a mess! "Oh no!" said Herr Korbes. He had egg on his nose.
He sat in his chair. OUCH! Pin poked him! He jumped up very fast. "This is not my day!" he said.
He was very, very upset. He ran to the door.
BOOM! Big Stone fell down. It blocked the door. Herr Korbes was so scared! He ran out the back door. He ran far, far away. He never came back.
And Cock and Hen? They were happy. Cat and Duck? They were happy too. Egg, Pin, and Big Stone? All happy! They all lived in the house. And they were very, very happy.
Original Story
Herr Korbes
A fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm
There were once a cock and a hen who wanted to take a journey together. So the cock built a beautiful carriage, which had four red wheels, and harnessed four mice to it. The hen seated herself in it with the cock, and they drove away together. Not long afterwards they met a cat who said, "Where are you going?" The cock replied, "We are going to the house of Herr Korbes." - "Take me with you," said the cat. The cock answered, "Most willingly, get up behind, lest you fall off in front. Take great care not to dirty my little red wheels. And you little wheels, roll on, and you little mice pipe out, as we go forth on our way to the house of Herr Korbes."
After this came a millstone, then an egg, then a duck, then a pin, and at last a needle, who all seated themselves in the carriage, and drove with them. When, however, they reached the house of Herr Korbes, Herr Korbes was not there. The mice drew the carriage into the barn, the hen flew with the cock upon a perch. The cat sat down by the hearth, the duck on the well-pole. The egg rolled itself into a towel, the pin stuck itself into the chair-cushion, the needle jumped on to the bed in the middle of the pillow, and the millstone laid itself over the door. Then Herr Korbes came home, went to the hearth, and was about to light the fire, when the cat threw a quantity of ashes in his face. He ran into the kitchen in a great hurry to wash it off, and the duck splashed some water in his face. He wanted to dry it with the towel, but the egg rolled up against him, broke, and glued up his eyes. He wanted to rest, and sat down in the chair, and then the pin pricked him. He fell in a passion, and threw himself on his bed, but as soon as he laid his head on the pillow, the needle pricked him, so that he screamed aloud, and was just going to run out into the wide world in his rage, but when he came to the house-door, the millstone leapt down and struck him dead. Herr Korbes must have been a very wicked man!
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Story DNA
Moral
Evil deeds will eventually be met with unexpected and collective retribution.
Plot Summary
A cock and hen embark on a journey to Herr Korbes' house, picking up a cat, millstone, egg, duck, pin, and needle along the way. Upon arriving, they find Herr Korbes absent and each hides within his house. When Herr Korbes returns, each hidden traveler successively attacks him – the cat throws ashes, the duck splashes water, the egg glues his eyes, the pin pricks him, and the needle pricks him again. Enraged, he attempts to flee but is killed by the millstone falling on him as he exits, implying he was a wicked man deserving of his fate.
Themes
Emotional Arc
anticipation to surprise to grim satisfaction
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Grimm's fairy tales often reflect a pre-industrial, agrarian society with clear social roles and a strong sense of poetic justice.
Plot Beats (14)
- A cock builds a carriage and sets out with a hen for Herr Korbes' house.
- A cat asks to join them and is allowed, with instructions not to dirty the wheels.
- A millstone, an egg, a duck, a pin, and a needle successively join the journey.
- The group arrives at Herr Korbes' house, but he is not home.
- Each traveler finds a strategic hiding spot: mice in barn, cock/hen on perch, cat by hearth, duck on well-pole, egg in towel, pin in cushion, needle in pillow, millstone over door.
- Herr Korbes returns home and goes to light a fire.
- The cat throws ashes in his face.
- Herr Korbes goes to wash his face, and the duck splashes water on him.
- He tries to dry his face, but the egg rolls out of the towel, breaks, and glues his eyes shut.
- He sits in a chair to rest, and the pin pricks him.
- He throws himself onto his bed, and the needle pricks him.
- Enraged, he runs to leave the house.
- As he exits, the millstone falls from above the door and kills him.
- The narrator concludes that Herr Korbes must have been a very wicked man.
Characters
Cock ★ protagonist
Carries himself with purpose, resourceful
Organized, leader, somewhat bossy
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A proud young adult anthropomorphic rooster with vibrant red and gold plumage, wearing a tailored green vest and a leather belt with a brass buckle. He stands upright with a confident posture, one hand resting on his hip, a friendly yet determined expression on his beak. His bright comb is tall and neatly groomed. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Hen ★ protagonist
Plump, follows the cock's lead
Compliant, trusting, along for the ride
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A proud adult hen with vibrant brown and gold feathers, a determined gleam in its eye. It wears a tiny blue vest and a small adventurer's satchel slung over one wing. Standing tall on two legs, chest puffed out, wings held confidently at its sides. Full body visible from head to toe, plain white background, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Cat ★ protagonist
Ashen fur
Opportunistic, vengeful
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An anthropomorphic feline protagonist, young adult with sleek silver fur and large emerald eyes, wearing a weathered leather tunic over a linen shirt, brown trousers, and sturdy boots. A small satchel hangs at the side. Standing confidently with one paw on a wooden staff, expression determined yet friendly, posture upright and alert. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature
Millstone ★ protagonist
Large, round, heavy
Patient, final
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A young adult male protagonist with a determined expression, standing confidently. He has short, tousled brown hair and keen green eyes. He wears a simple, earth-toned tunic with a leather belt, sturdy trousers, and worn leather boots. A small, worn leather satchel is slung over his shoulder. His posture is upright and ready for adventure. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Herr Korbes ⚔ antagonist
Implied to be wicked
Attire: Peasant clothing
Unsuspecting, easily angered, abusive
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A stern man in his late fifties with a sharp, angular face, deep-set eyes under thick grey eyebrows, and a thin-lipped frown. He has slicked-back salt-and-pepper hair and a neatly pointed grey beard. He wears a high-collared, black velvet tailcoat with silver buttons over a crisp white shirt, dark trousers, and polished leather boots. He stands rigidly upright, one hand clutching a leather-bound ledger to his chest, the other pointing a long, accusatory finger forward. His posture is severe and imposing, his expression one of cold, calculating disdain. He is positioned in a dimly lit, wood-paneled study with shadowy bookshelves. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Road to Herr Korbes' House
A road suitable for a small carriage pulled by mice.
Mood: Neutral, journey-like
The cock and hen gather companions for their journey.
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A winding, pebbled road barely wide enough for a tiny carriage, carved through an enchanted twilight forest. Giant, dew-kissed clover and towering blades of grass form lush walls on either side. Oversized, glowing mushrooms and intricate ferns dot the mossy banks. The path is made of smooth, grey stones, polished by miniature wheels. Fireflies emit a soft, amber glow, illuminating cobwebs strung between clover stems like fairy hammocks. The air is misty and still, with a palette of deep emerald, velvety moss, and the warm, golden light from the fireflies. Distant, gnarled tree roots form archways over the path. The atmosphere is quiet, mysterious, and deeply magical. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Barn
A barn large enough to accommodate a small carriage.
Mood: Safe, temporary haven
The animals hide the carriage upon arrival.
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Golden hour light bathes a large, rustic wooden barn nestled in a rolling meadow. The weathered, grey-brown timber structure features a high, peaked roof and a wide, arched doorway large enough for a small carriage. Sun rays slant through the opening, illuminating floating dust motes and revealing stacked hay bales within. The surrounding field is dotted with wildflowers and tall grasses, leading to a distant line of ancient oak trees under a soft, peach-hued sky. The scene is peaceful, warm, and slightly nostalgic. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Interior of Herr Korbes' House
A house with a hearth, kitchen, well-pole, chair, and bed.
Mood: Initially homey, then chaotic and dangerous
The animals enact their revenge on Herr Korbes.
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Evening light filters through a small, leaded glass window into a rustic cottage interior. A large stone hearth with a glowing, crackling fire dominates one wall, casting warm, flickering light across the room. Opposite, a simple wooden bed with a thick, homespun quilt sits against the wall. A sturdy, well-worn chair rests near the hearth. In the center, a wooden well-pole extends down through the floorboards into darkness. The kitchen area features a rough-hewn table, hanging iron pots, and bundles of dried herbs. The atmosphere is cozy yet quiet, with deep shadows in the corners. Colors are warm browns, stone grays, and the orange glow of embers. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
House Door
The exit of Herr Korbes' house.
Mood: Deadly
Herr Korbes is killed by the millstone.
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A weathered, dark wooden door set within a crumbling stone archway marks the exit of Herr Korbes' house. Twilight casts long shadows, with the last warm glow of sunset on the distant hills contrasting with the cool blue shadows engulfing the doorway. Overgrown ivy and thick moss cling to the rough-hewn stone walls, and a faint, winding dirt path leads away into a misty, ancient forest. The air feels still and quiet, with a single, gnarled tree branch reaching toward the heavy iron door handle. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
