Rapunzel

by Andrew Lang · from The Red Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 5-10 1444 words 7 min read
Cover: Rapunzel

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 493 words 3 min Canon 100/100

A man and his wife wanted a baby. They lived near a walled garden. The wife saw special flowers there. She wanted to eat them. She grew pale and sad.

Her husband climbed the wall at night. He picked flowers for his wife. She ate them and felt happy. But she wanted more.

The next night, he climbed again. A witch stood there. She was very angry. "You stole my flowers!" she said.

The man was scared. "My wife needed them," he said.

The witch said, "You can have more flowers. But you must give me your baby."

The man was very scared. He said yes. The witch took the baby. She named her Rapunzel.

Rapunzel grew to be a pretty girl. At twelve, Rapunzel lived in a tower. The tower had no door or stairs. It had one small window at the top.

The witch wanted to visit. She stood below. She called, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair."

Rapunzel had long, gold hair. She let her hair fall. The witch climbed up it.

One day, a prince rode by. He heard Rapunzel singing. Her voice was sweet. He listened each day.

He saw the witch come. He heard her call. "Rapunzel, let down your hair." He saw her hair fall.

The next night, the prince came. He called, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair." Rapunzel let down her hair. The prince climbed up.

Rapunzel was scared at first. She had never seen a prince. He was kind. He liked her singing. They became good friends.

The prince came each night. They liked each other very much. "I will help you leave," he said. "Bring silk. We will make a ladder."

One day, Rapunzel made a mistake. She said to the witch, "You are heavy to pull up. The young prince comes up fast."

The witch was very angry. "You wicked child!" she cried. "You tricked me!"

The witch cut off Rapunzel's long hair. Then she sent Rapunzel away to a lonely place.

That night, the witch tied the cut hair to the window. The prince came. He called, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair."

The witch let down the hair. The prince climbed up. He saw the witch, not Rapunzel.

"Your Rapunzel is gone!" the witch said. "You will never see her."

The prince was very sad. He jumped from the window. He fell and hurt his eyes. He could not see.

The prince looked for Rapunzel for a long time. He was sad and alone.

One day, he heard a sweet voice. It was Rapunzel! She was in the lonely place. She saw him and ran to him.

Two happy tears fell on his eyes. His eyes could see again! He was so glad.

The prince took Rapunzel to his kingdom. They had two children. They were a happy family.

And so, they learned that love and never giving up can make you happy. They all lived happily ever after.

Original Story 1444 words · 7 min read

RAPUNZEL

Once upon a time there lived a man and his wife who were very unhappy

because they had no children. These good people had a little window at

the back of their house, which looked into the most lovely garden, full

of all manner of beautiful flowers and vegetables; but the garden was

surrounded by a high wall, and no one dared to enter it, for it

belonged to a witch of great power, who was feared by the whole world.

One day the woman stood at the window overlooking the garden, and saw

there a bed full of the finest rampion: the leaves looked so fresh and

green that she longed to eat them. The desire grew day by day, and just

because she knew she couldn’t possibly get any, she pined away and

became quite pale and wretched. Then her husband grew alarmed and said:

‘What ails you, dear wife?’

‘Oh,’ she answered, ‘if I don’t get some rampion to eat out of the

garden behind the house, I know I shall die.’

The man, who loved her dearly, thought to himself, ‘Come! rather than

let your wife die you shall fetch her some rampion, no matter the

cost.’ So at dusk he climbed over the wall into the witch’s garden,

and, hastily gathering a handful of rampion leaves, he returned with

them to his wife. She made them into a salad, which tasted so good that

her longing for the forbidden food was greater than ever. If she were

to know any peace of mind, there was nothing for it but that her

husband should climb over the garden wall again, and fetch her some

more. So at dusk over he got, but when he reached the other side he

drew back in terror, for there, standing before him, was the old witch.

‘How dare you,’ she said, with a wrathful glance, ‘climb into my garden

and steal my rampion like a common thief? You shall suffer for your

foolhardiness.’

‘Oh!’ he implored, ‘pardon my presumption; necessity alone drove me to

the deed. My wife saw your rampion from her window, and conceived such

a desire for it that she would certainly have died if her wish had not

been gratified.’ Then the Witch’s anger was a little appeased, and she

said:

‘If it’s as you say, you may take as much rampion away with you as you

like, but on one condition only—that you give me the child your wife

will shortly bring into the world. All shall go well with it, and I

will look after it like a mother.’

The man in his terror agreed to everything she asked, and as soon as

the child was born the Witch appeared, and having given it the name of

Rapunzel, which is the same as rampion, she carried it off with her.

Rapunzel was the most beautiful child under the sun. When she was

twelve years old the Witch shut her up in a tower, in the middle of a

great wood, and the tower had neither stairs nor doors, only high up at

the very top a small window. When the old Witch wanted to get in she

stood underneath and called out:

‘Rapunzel, Rapunzel,

Let down your golden hair,’

for Rapunzel had wonderful long hair, and it was as fine as spun gold.

Whenever she heard the Witch’s voice she unloosed her plaits, and let

her hair fall down out of the window about twenty yards below, and the

old Witch climbed up by it.

After they had lived like this for a few years, it happened one day

that a Prince was riding through the wood and passed by the tower. As

he drew near it he heard someone singing so sweetly that he stood still

spell-bound, and listened. It was Rapunzel in her loneliness trying to

while away the time by letting her sweet voice ring out into the wood.

The Prince longed to see the owner of the voice, but he sought in vain

for a door in the tower. He rode home, but he was so haunted by the

song he had heard that he returned every day to the wood and listened.

One day, when he was standing thus behind a tree, he saw the old Witch

approach and heard her call out:

‘Rapunzel, Rapunzel,

Let down your golden hair.’

Then Rapunzel let down her plaits, and the Witch climbed up by them.

‘So that’s the staircase, is it?’ said the Prince. ‘Then I too will

climb it and try my luck.’

So on the following day, at dusk, he went to the foot of the tower and

cried:

‘Rapunzel, Rapunzel,

Let down your golden hair,’

and as soon as she had let it down the Prince climbed up.

At first Rapunzel was terribly frightened when a man came in, for she

had never seen one before; but the Prince spoke to her so kindly, and

told her at once that his heart had been so touched by her singing,

that he felt he should know no peace of mind till he had seen her. Very

soon Rapunzel forgot her fear, and when he asked her to marry him she

consented at once. ‘For,’ she thought, ‘he is young and handsome, and

I’ll certainly be happier with him than with the old Witch.’ So she put

her hand in his and said:

‘Yes, I will gladly go with you, only how am I to get down out of the

tower? Every time you come to see me you must bring a skein of silk

with you, and I will make a ladder of them, and when it is finished I

will climb down by it, and you will take me away on your horse.’

They arranged that till the ladder was ready, he was to come to her

every evening, because the old woman was with her during the day. The

old Witch, of course, knew nothing of what was going on, till one day

Rapunzel, not thinking of what she was about, turned to the Witch and

said:

‘How is it, good mother, that you are so much harder to pull up than

the young Prince? He is always with me in a moment.’

‘Oh! you wicked child,’ cried the Witch. ‘What is this I hear? I

thought I had hidden you safely from the whole world, and in spite of

it you have managed to deceive me.’

In her wrath she seized Rapunzel’s beautiful hair, wound it round and

round her left hand, and then grasping a pair of scissors in her right,

snip snap, off it came, and the beautiful plaits lay on the ground.

And, worse than this, she was so hard-hearted that she took Rapunzel to

a lonely desert place, and there left her to live in loneliness and

misery.

But on the evening of the day in which she had driven poor Rapunzel

away, the Witch fastened the plaits on to a hook in the window, and

when the Prince came and called out:

‘Rapunzel, Rapunzel,

Let down your golden hair,’

she let them down, and the Prince climbed up as usual, but instead of

his beloved Rapunzel he found the old Witch, who fixed her evil,

glittering eyes on him, and cried mockingly:

‘Ah, ah! you thought to find your lady love, but the pretty bird has

flown and its song is dumb; the cat caught it, and will scratch out

your eyes too. Rapunzel is lost to you for ever—you will never see her

more.’

The Prince was beside himself with grief, and in his despair he jumped

right down from the tower, and, though he escaped with his life, the

thorns among which he fell pierced his eyes out. Then he wandered,

blind and miserable, through the wood, eating nothing but roots and

berries, and weeping and lamenting the loss of his lovely bride. So he

wandered about for some years, as wretched and unhappy as he could well

be, and at last he came to the desert place where Rapunzel was living.

Of a sudden he heard a voice which seemed strangely familiar to him. He

walked eagerly in the direction of the sound, and when he was quite

close, Rapunzel recognised him and fell on his neck and wept. But two

of her tears touched his eyes, and in a moment they became quite clear

again, and he saw as well as he had ever done. Then he led her to his

kingdom, where they were received and welcomed with great joy, and they

lived happily ever after.[23]

[23] Grimm.


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love and perseverance can overcome even the direst of circumstances and lead to happiness.

Plot Summary

A childless couple's desire for forbidden rampion leads them to promise their daughter, Rapunzel, to a powerful witch. The witch imprisons Rapunzel in a tower, accessible only by her long golden hair. A prince discovers Rapunzel and falls in love, but their secret is revealed, leading the witch to cut Rapunzel's hair, banish her, and blind the prince. After years of wandering, the blind prince finds Rapunzel and their children; her tears restore his sight, and they return to his kingdom to live happily ever after.

Themes

imprisonment and freedomforbidden desire and consequencelove and perseverancebetrayal and redemption

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition of a key phrase (Rapunzel, Rapunzel, Let down your golden hair), direct and simple prose

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: happy
Magic: a powerful witch, magical healing tears, unusually long and strong hair
Rapunzel's hair (freedom, connection, beauty, vulnerability)the tower (imprisonment, isolation)the rampion (forbidden desire, temptation)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

This version is from Andrew Lang's 'The Red Fairy Book,' which compiles tales from various sources, but the story is primarily attributed to the Brothers Grimm, who collected German folk tales in the early 19th century. The story reflects common themes and tropes of European folklore.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A man's pregnant wife craves rampion from a witch's garden, leading him to steal it.
  2. The witch catches the husband and demands their unborn child in exchange for the rampion.
  3. The witch takes the baby, names her Rapunzel, and at age twelve, imprisons her in a tall tower with no doors or stairs.
  4. The witch uses Rapunzel's long hair as a ladder to visit her.
  5. A prince hears Rapunzel singing, discovers the witch's method of entry, and learns to call for Rapunzel's hair.
  6. The prince visits Rapunzel, they fall in love, and plan her escape using a silk ladder.
  7. Rapunzel innocently reveals the prince's visits to the witch.
  8. The witch, in a fury, cuts Rapunzel's hair and banishes her to a desolate desert.
  9. The witch uses Rapunzel's severed hair to lure the prince, then reveals her deception and Rapunzel's fate.
  10. The prince, heartbroken, jumps from the tower, falling into thorns that blind him.
  11. The blind prince wanders for years, eating roots and berries, searching for Rapunzel.
  12. He eventually finds Rapunzel in the desert, now with two children, and recognizes her voice.
  13. Rapunzel's tears fall on his eyes, restoring his sight.
  14. The prince leads Rapunzel and their children to his kingdom, where they live happily.

Characters 5 characters

Rapunzel ★ protagonist

human child female

Most beautiful child under the sun, wonderful long hair as fine as spun gold

Attire: Simple dress appropriate for a girl kept in isolation, possibly homespun

Extremely long golden hair cascading from a tower window

Initially frightened but quickly trusting, obedient, longs for freedom

Image Prompt & Upload
A young woman with extraordinarily long, flowing golden hair cascading down her body, wearing a simple lavender dress with puffed sleeves and a fitted bodice. She has bright green eyes, a gentle smile, and rosy cheeks. Her hair is adorned with small flowers woven into a thick braid. She stands with a graceful posture, one hand lightly touching her hair, looking forward with a hopeful expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Prince ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Handsome

Attire: Royal attire suitable for riding through the woods, including boots and perhaps a tunic or doublet

A royal figure gazing up at a tower, silhouetted against the sky

Persistent, romantic, easily moved by beauty and song

Image Prompt & Upload
A young man in his early twenties with a noble and determined expression, standing tall with confident posture. He has short, neatly styled dark brown hair and piercing blue eyes. He wears a royal blue doublet with intricate gold embroidery along the collar and sleeves, paired with dark fitted trousers and polished black leather boots. A flowing crimson cape is draped over his shoulders, fastened with a golden clasp at his neck. His right hand rests gently on the hilt of a sheathed sword at his waist. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Witch ⚔ antagonist

magical creature elderly female

Implied to be physically imposing and intimidating

Attire: Dark, concealing robes, perhaps with a pointed hat

Grasping scissors, ready to cut Rapunzel's hair

Wrathful, possessive, deceptive

Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly woman with a sharp, angular face and a cruel smile, deep-set eyes glowing with a faint green light. She wears a tattered, dark purple robe over a black dress, with a pointed hat perched on her wild, gray-streaked hair. Her posture is hunched, one gnarled hand clutching a twisted wooden staff topped with a pulsating crystal, the other holding a small, steaming vial. Her fingers are long and claw-like. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Man ◆ supporting

human adult male

No specific details given

Attire: Simple peasant clothing

Climbing over a wall in desperation

Loving, desperate, easily frightened

Image Prompt & Upload
A middle-aged man with kind, weathered features and short salt-and-pepper hair stands calmly. He wears a simple, earth-toned tunic with rolled sleeves, sturdy brown trousers, and worn leather boots. His posture is relaxed yet sturdy, with a gentle, welcoming expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Wife ◆ supporting

human adult female

Pale and wretched from longing

Attire: Simple peasant dress

Gazing longingly out of a window

Desire-driven, passive, longing

Image Prompt & Upload
A middle-aged woman with kind, gentle eyes and a soft smile, her warm brown hair neatly pulled back into a bun. She wears a simple, modest dress in a muted earth tone, covered by a clean white apron. Her posture is relaxed yet attentive, with hands clasped gently in front of her. She has a nurturing and dependable presence. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Witch's Garden

outdoor dusk

A lush garden full of rampion and beautiful flowers, enclosed by a high wall.

Mood: forbidden, tempting, dangerous

The husband steals rampion, encounters the witch, and makes a deal for his unborn child.

rampion high wall flowers vegetables
Image Prompt & Upload
A misty dawn in a secluded witch's garden, enclosed by a high, weathered stone wall covered in thick ivy. Soft, ethereal morning light filters through, illuminating lush, overgrown beds of rampion with tall flower spikes, alongside foxglove, moonflowers, and deep purple monkshood. A winding dirt path leads to a moss-covered sundial. The air is still and humid, with dewdrops glistening on every petal and leaf. Colors are rich and saturated: deep greens, vibrant purples, and creamy whites against the grey stone. No border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Tower in the Woods

outdoor

A tall tower in the middle of a great wood, with no stairs or doors, but a small window at the top.

Mood: isolated, lonely, magical

Rapunzel is imprisoned, lets down her hair, and meets the Prince.

tower woods small window Rapunzel's hair
Image Prompt & Upload
Misty morning in an ancient, dense forest of towering oaks and pines. A tall, slender tower of weathered grey stone rises from the center, covered in clinging ivy. It has no visible door or external staircase, only a single small, arched window near the top, glowing faintly with warm amber light. Sunbeams pierce the canopy, illuminating floating dust motes and moss-covered roots. The air is cool and damp, with a palette of deep greens, earthy browns, and soft grey stone. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Inside the Tower

indoor

Implied to be a small, simple room at the top of the tower.

Mood: isolated, intimate, secret

Rapunzel and the Prince meet and fall in love; Rapunzel reveals the witch's weakness.

small window silk ladder Rapunzel
Image Prompt & Upload
Late afternoon sunlight streams through a narrow arched window, illuminating a small circular stone room at the tower's peak. Warm golden light falls across rough-hewn grey stone walls and a simple dark wooden floor. A single weathered wooden stool and a small table sit near the window. Through the open window, a vast, sun-dappled forest stretches to the horizon under a clear blue sky. Long shadows stretch across the floor from the window's mullions. The atmosphere is quiet, still, and steeped in golden light. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Lonely Desert Place

outdoor

A desolate and barren landscape where Rapunzel is banished.

Mood: desolate, miserable, hopeful

The Prince, now blind, finds Rapunzel, and her tears restore his sight.

desert Rapunzel roots berries
Image Prompt & Upload
A vast, desolate desert at sunset, endless rolling dunes of pale orange sand stretching under a deep amber sky. Jagged, rust-colored rock formations pierce the horizon, casting long, dramatic shadows. A single, gnarled dead tree stands silhouetted on a distant ridge. The air is still and silent, filled with a dusty haze that catches the last golden rays of sunlight. The ground is cracked and barren, with no sign of water or life. The mood is profoundly lonely and unforgiving. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.