Snowflake
by Andrew Lang · from The Pink Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Once, an old man and woman lived alone. They wanted a child very much.
It was winter. The snow was deep. Ivan and Marie saw children play. "Let's make a snow child," said Ivan.
They made a little snow child. They gave it eyes and a mouth. Then, it smiled! It was alive and moving.
"Hello," said the snow child. Her name was Snowflake. Ivan and Marie were so happy. Snowflake was their real girl now. They loved her very much.
Snowflake grew fast. She was pretty and kind. All people loved her. Her skin was white like snow.
Spring came. The sun was warm. Snowflake felt sad. She liked the cold days best. Warm days made her feel slow.
One summer day, the village girls came. "Come play with us," they said.
Marie was worried. "Be safe with her," she told the girls. Snowflake went to play with them.
They played games in the green woods. They made pretty flower crowns. Snowflake played too. She laughed and ran.
The sun set. The girls made a small, warm fire. They jumped over it. Snowflake was last in line.
Snowflake jumped high. She gave a soft sigh. Then, she was gone. She disappeared like a quiet dream.
The girls looked for her. "Snowflake!" they called. But they could not find her.
Ivan and Marie looked for many days. They called her name in the woods. They missed her very much. Their hearts felt empty.
Snowflake had melted in the warm air. She floated up like a soft mist. She was part of the sky now.
Some happy times are short. We think of them with love. Snowflake was like the snow—pretty but gone. Ivan and Marie always loved her.
Original Story
Snowflake
Slavonic story. Contes Populaires Slaves, traduits par Louis Leger.
Paris: Leroux, Editeur.
Once upon a time there lived a peasant called Ivan, and he had a wife
whose name was Marie. They would have been quite happy except for one
thing: they had no children to play with, and as they were now old
people they did not find that watching the children of their neighbours
at all made up to them for having one of their own.
One winter, which nobody living will ever forget, the snow lay so deep
that it came up to the knees of even the tallest man. When it had all
fallen, and the sun was shining again, the children ran out into the
street to play, and the old man and his wife sat at their window and
gazed at them. The children first made a sort of little terrace, and
stamped it hard and firm, and then they began to make a snow woman. Ivan
and Marie watched them, the while thinking about many things.
Suddenly Ivan’s face brightened, and, looking at his wife, he said,
‘Wife, why shouldn’t we make a snow woman too?’
‘Why not?’ replied Marie, who happened to be in a very good temper; ‘it
might amuse us a little. But there is no use making a woman. Let us make
a little snow child, and pretend it is a living one.’
‘Yes, let us do that,’ said Ivan, and he took down his cap and went into
the garden with his old wife.
Then the two set to work with all their might to make a doll out of
the snow. They shaped a little body and two little hands and two little
feet. On top of all they placed a ball of snow, out of which the head
was to be.
‘What in the world are you doing?’ asked a passer-by.
‘Can’t you guess?’ returned Ivan.
‘Making a snow-child,’ replied Marie.
They had finished the nose and the chin. Two holes were left for the
eyes, and Ivan carefully shaped out the mouth. No sooner had he done so
than he felt a warm breath upon his cheek. He started back in surprise
and looked--and behold! the eyes of the child met his, and its lips,
which were as red as raspberries, smiled at him!
‘What is it?’ cried Ivan, crossing himself. ‘Am I mad, or is the thing
bewitched?’
The snow-child bent its head as if it had been really alive. It moved
its little arms and its little legs in the snow that lay about it just
as the living children did theirs.
‘Ah! Ivan, Ivan,’ exclaimed Marie, trembling with joy, ‘heaven has sent
us a child at last!’ And she threw herself upon Snowflake (for that was
the snow-child’s name) and covered her with kisses. And the loose snow
fell away from Snowflake as an egg shell does from an egg, and it was a
little girl whom Marie held in her arms.
‘Oh! my darling Snowflake!’ cried the old woman, and led her into the
cottage.
And Snowflake grew fast; each hour as well as each day made a
difference, and every day she became more and more beautiful. The old
couple hardly knew how to contain themselves for joy, and thought of
nothing else. The cottage was always full of village children, for they
amused Snowflake, and there was nothing in the world they would not
have done to amuse her. She was their doll, and they were continually
inventing new dresses for her, and teaching her songs or playing with
her. Nobody knew how clever she was! She noticed everything, and could
learn a lesson in a moment. Anyone would have taken her for thirteen
at least! And, besides all that, she was so good and obedient; and
so pretty, too! Her skin was as white as snow, her eyes as blue as
forget-me-nots, and her hair was long and golden. Only her cheeks had no
colour in them, but were as fair as her forehead.
So the winter went on, till at last the spring sun mounted higher in the
heavens and began to warm the earth. The grass grew green in the fields,
and high in the air the larks were heard singing. The village girls met
and danced in a ring, singing, ‘Beautiful spring, how came you here?
How came you here? Did you come on a plough, or was it a harrow?’ Only
Snowflake sat quite still by the window of the cottage.
‘What is the matter, dear child?’ asked Marie. ‘Why are you so sad? Are
you ill? or have they treated you unkindly?’
‘No,’ replied Snowflake, ‘it is nothing, mother; no one has hurt me; I
am well.’
The spring sun had chased away the last snow from its hiding place under
the hedges; the fields were full of flowers; nightingales sang in the
trees, and all the world was gay. But the gayer grew the birds and the
flowers the sadder became Snowflake. She hid herself from her playmates,
and curled herself up where the shadows were deepest, like a lily
amongst its leaves. Her only pleasure was to lie amid the green willows
near some sparkling stream. At the dawn and at twilight only she seemed
happy. When a great storm broke, and the earth was white with hail, she
became bright and joyous as the Snowflake of old; but when the clouds
passed, and the hail melted beneath the sun, Snowflake would burst into
tears and weep as a sister would weep over her brother.
The spring passed, and it was the eve of St. John, or Midsummer Day.
This was the greatest holiday of the year, when the young girls met in
the woods to dance and play. They went to fetch Snowflake, and said to
Marie: ‘Let her come and dance with us.’
But Marie was afraid; she could not tell why, only she could not bear
the child to go. Snowflake did not wish to go either, but they had no
excuse ready. So Marie kissed the girl and said: ‘Go, my Snowflake, and
be happy with your friends, and you, dear children, be careful of her.
You know she is the light of my eyes to me.’
‘Oh, we will take care of her,’ cried the girls gaily, and they ran off
to the woods. There they wore wreaths, gathered nosegays, and sang songs
some sad, some merry. And whatever they did Snowflake did too.
When the sun set they lit a fire of dry grass, and placed themselves in
a row, Snowflake being the last of all. ‘Now, watch us,’ they said, ‘and
run just as we do.’
And they all began to sing and to jump one after another across the
fire.
Suddenly, close behind them, they heard a sigh, then a groan. ‘Ah!’ They
turned hastily and looked at each other. There was nothing. They
looked again. Where was Snowflake? She has hidden herself for fun, they
thought, and searched for her everywhere. ‘Snowflake! Snowflake!’ But
there was no answer. ‘Where can she be? Oh, she must have gone home.’
They returned to the village, but there was no Snowflake.
For days after that they sought her high and low. They examined every
bush and every hedge, but there was no Snowflake. And long after
everyone else had given up hope Ivan and Marie would wander through the
woods crying ‘Snowflake, my dove, come back, come back!’ And sometimes
they thought they heard a call, but it was never the voice of Snowflake.
And what had become of her? Had a fierce wild beast seized her and
dragged her into his lair in the forest? Had some bird carried her off
across the wide blue sea?
No, no beast had touched her, no bird had borne her away. With the
first breath of flame that swept over her when she ran with her friends
Snowflake had melted away, and a little soft haze floating upwards was
all that remained of her.
Story DNA
Moral
Some joys are fleeting, and nature's cycles are inevitable, even when they bring sorrow.
Plot Summary
An old, childless peasant couple, Ivan and Marie, create a snow-child who miraculously comes to life and brings them immense joy, named Snowflake. Snowflake thrives in winter but grows increasingly sad as spring arrives, her snow-like nature incompatible with warmth. On Midsummer's Eve, she joins other girls in a fire-jumping ritual, where she melts away, leaving her adoptive parents to mourn her inevitable, yet heartbreaking, loss.
Themes
Emotional Arc
longing to joy to sorrow
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Midsummer (Kupala Night in Slavic traditions) is a significant pagan holiday celebrating the summer solstice, often involving fire rituals for purification and fertility, which here becomes the catalyst for Snowflake's demise.
Plot Beats (14)
- Ivan and Marie, an old, childless couple, long for a child.
- During a deep winter, they watch children playing in the snow and decide to build a snow-child themselves.
- As they sculpt the snow-child, it miraculously comes to life, its eyes opening and lips smiling.
- The snow-child, named Snowflake, sheds her snow shell and becomes a real little girl, bringing immense joy to the couple.
- Snowflake grows quickly, is beautiful, intelligent, and beloved by all, though her cheeks lack color.
- As spring arrives, Snowflake becomes increasingly melancholic, shunning play and only finding happiness in cold or stormy weather.
- On Midsummer's Eve, the village girls invite Snowflake to join their traditional festivities in the woods.
- Marie is hesitant but allows Snowflake to go, cautioning the girls to care for her.
- Snowflake participates in the games and wreath-making with the other girls.
- As the sun sets, the girls light a bonfire and begin jumping over it, with Snowflake last in line.
- Upon jumping the fire, Snowflake sighs and groans, then disappears.
- The other girls search for her, then return to the village, unable to find her.
- Ivan and Marie search for days and weeks, calling her name, but she is gone.
- It is revealed that Snowflake melted away with the heat of the fire, becoming a soft haze that floated upwards.
Characters
Snowflake ★ protagonist
Skin as white as snow, eyes as blue as forget-me-nots, long golden hair, cheeks fair like her forehead
Attire: Inferred peasant girl's dress, adorned with flowers and wreaths by the village children
Obedient, clever, sensitive
Image Prompt & Upload
A young woman with an ethereal appearance, her skin has a faint, luminous blue-white tint like fresh snow. Her long, flowing hair is the purest white, styled in loose waves with tiny, glittering ice crystals woven throughout. She wears a graceful gown of layered, translucent pale blue and silver fabrics that shimmer like frost, cinched at the waist with a delicate crystal belt. Her expression is gentle yet determined, with piercing ice-blue eyes. She stands in a poised, graceful posture, one hand lightly touching a floating, intricate snowflake made of pure light. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Ivan ◆ supporting
Old peasant man
Attire: Peasant clothing, cap
Loving, hopeful
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A young man in his early twenties with a sturdy build and a thoughtful expression. He has short, tousled brown hair and a light stubble on his jaw. He wears a simple, off-white linen shirt with the sleeves rolled up, brown woolen trousers, and worn leather boots. He stands in a relaxed but attentive posture, one hand resting on a wooden staff. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Marie ◆ supporting
Old peasant woman
Attire: Peasant clothing
Loving, maternal
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An elderly woman with a kind, wrinkled face and wise, twinkling eyes. She has a gentle smile and silver hair pinned up in a neat bun. She wears a simple, long-sleeved dress of soft blue wool, covered by a faded floral apron. Over her shoulders is a thick, knitted shawl in earthy tones. She stands with a slightly hunched but sturdy posture, holding a small, glowing wooden orb in her cupped hands. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Peasant Cottage Window
A window where Ivan and Marie sit, gazing at children playing outside.
Mood: Melancholy, wistful
Ivan and Marie decide to build a snow child.
Image Prompt & Upload
A weathered peasant cottage with a thatched roof and whitewashed walls, viewed from slightly below a small, open wooden window. The window is framed by climbing roses and has a rough stone sill. Late afternoon golden sunlight streams through the opening, casting long shadows across a dirt path and a small, wildflower-filled garden outside. The scene is bathed in warm amber and soft green hues, with a dreamy, nostalgic atmosphere. In the distance, a sun-dappled meadow and a dark, enchanted forest line the horizon under a soft, hazy sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Snowy Garden
A garden covered in deep snow, where Ivan and Marie build Snowflake.
Mood: Hopeful, magical
Snowflake comes to life.
Image Prompt & Upload
A secluded fairy tale garden at twilight, blanketed in deep, untouched snow. Ancient, gnarled trees are frosted with glittering ice crystals, their bare branches heavy with white. A winding stone path is almost completely buried. A rustic wooden bench, dusted with snow, sits beneath a towering, snow-laden pine. Soft, cool blue and purple light from the fading sun mingles with a warm, inviting golden glow from the windows of a distant, half-timbered cottage. The air is still, with a few delicate snowflakes gently falling, catching the last light. The scene is serene, magical, and profoundly quiet. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Village Cottage Interior
The interior of Ivan and Marie's cottage, filled with village children playing with Snowflake.
Mood: Warm, joyful
Snowflake grows and brings joy to the old couple and the village children.
Image Prompt & Upload
Sunlit interior of a cozy wooden cottage, morning light streaming through small, leaded glass windows. Warm golden rays illuminate a rustic living space with a large stone fireplace, hand-hewn timber beams, and a worn wooden floor. A simple table and chairs sit near the hearth, surrounded by scattered handmade wooden toys and a small, fluffy white cat sleeping on a woven rug. Shelves hold clay pots and stacked books, while dried herbs hang from the rafters. The air is thick with dust motes dancing in the sunbeams, casting long shadows. A sense of quiet, playful warmth permeates the scene. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Willow Stream
A sparkling stream surrounded by green willows, where Snowflake finds solace.
Mood: Melancholy, reflective
Snowflake's sadness increases as spring progresses.
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Early morning light filters through a canopy of weeping willows, their long, slender branches trailing like soft green curtains into a crystal-clear stream. The water sparkles with a silvery-blue gleam as it flows over smooth, moss-covered stones. Sunbeams dapple the forest floor, illuminating patches of delicate wildflowers and rich, damp earth. The air is still and misty, carrying a sense of profound peace and gentle magic. A soft, ethereal glow seems to emanate from the very water itself. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Midsummer Bonfire in the Woods
A fire of dry grass in the woods, lit for the Midsummer celebration.
Mood: Festive, tragic
Snowflake melts away in the fire.
Image Prompt & Upload
A clearing in a dense birch forest at midsummer dusk, the sky a deep indigo fading to soft peach at the horizon. A large, crackling bonfire of dry grass and branches dominates the center, its vibrant orange and yellow flames casting a warm, flickering glow on the surrounding scene. The fire illuminates a circle of trampled wildflowers and mossy ground. In the foreground, tall grasses and delicate ferns are backlit by the firelight, their edges glowing. Wisps of smoke drift upwards, catching the last light. The air is still and warm, filled with the soft hum of evening insects. The forest floor is dappled with deep shadows and bright patches of firelight, creating a magical, intimate atmosphere. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration