Dorani

by Andrew Lang · from The Olive Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 2189 words 10 min read
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Once, there was a girl named Dorani. She had golden hair. It smelled like roses. She lived with her father. She had a fairy friend. Dorani was happy. Her father was kind. The fairy had magic. They played. Dorani smiled often.

Dorani cut her hair. She put it in a leaf. She threw it in the river. The prince found the leaf. He saw the golden hair. It was beautiful. He loved it. He wanted to marry her. He told his father. The prince was happy.

The king sent his men to find the girl. They searched all over. They found Dorani in her village. Dorani said yes to marry the prince. But she had one rule. She must go home each night. She told the men. The men agreed.

They had a big wedding. Many people came. Dorani wore a white dress. But she did not talk to the prince. She sat still all day. When night came, she went home. The prince was very sad. He did not understand. Why?

The prince walked sadly in the garden. The gardener saw him. "Why are you sad?" the gardener asked. The prince told him about Dorani and her silence. The gardener gave him some magic powder. "This will make you hide," he said.

That night, the prince used the magic powder. He became hidden from sight. He followed Dorani to her father's house. She went inside and put on a silver dress. Then she called a magic stool. "Fly!" she said. The stool glowed.

The stool flew high into the sky. The prince held on tightly. Dorani and her fairy friend flew to a magic place. It was beautiful and bright. They sang happy songs. They danced. They played all night long.

The prince watched all the singing and dancing. He held the stool very tight. He did not want to fall. They flew back home before morning. Dorani was very tired. She did not know the prince was there. She went to sleep.

In the morning, the prince went to Dorani. "I had a dream last night," he said. He told her about the magic place. He described the singing and dancing. Dorani listened carefully. She did not say a word. She was surprised. But she stayed silent.

The next night, the prince followed Dorani again. He watched her sing and dance in the magic place. In the morning, he told her his dream again. He told her all he saw. Dorani looked at him closely. "Were you there?" she asked. She was curious.

"Yes," said the prince. "I love you." Dorani said, "Do not follow me tonight." The prince agreed. He wanted to prove his love. He was determined.

The prince stayed home that night. He waited. Dorani sang well for Indra. Indra was very happy with her singing. "You can wish for something," he said. Dorani said, "I want your magic lute." She had a plan.

Indra was not happy about her wish. He liked Dorani a lot. But he gave her the magic lute. "You cannot come back to my palace," he said gently. He was sad to see her go. Dorani thanked him. She took the lute.

Dorani went back to the palace. She talked to the prince. "I choose to stay with you," she said. "True love means we talk and be together." She hugged him. She would never leave again.

And Dorani and the prince lived happily together forever. They always talked and loved each other.

Original Story 2189 words · 10 min read

DORANI

Once upon a time there lived in a city of Hindustan a seller of scents

and essences, who had a very beautiful daughter named Dorani. This

maiden had a friend who was a fairy, and the two were high in favour

with Indra, the king of fairyland, because they were able to sing so

sweetly and dance so deftly that no one in the kingdom could equal

them for grace and beauty. Dorani had the most lovely hair in the

world, for it was like spun gold, and the smell of it was like the

smell of fresh roses. But her locks were so long and thick that the

weight of it was often unbearable, and one day she cut off a shining

tress, and wrapping it in a large leaf, threw it in the river which

ran just below her window. Now it happened that the king's son was out

hunting, and had gone down to the river to drink, when there floated

towards him a folded leaf, from which came a perfume of roses. The

prince, with idle curiosity, took a step into the water and caught the

leaf as it was sailing by. He opened it, and within he found a lock of

hair like spun gold, and from which came a faint, exquisite odour.

When the prince reached home that day he looked so sad and was so

quiet that his father wondered if any ill had befallen him, and asked

what was the matter. Then the youth took from his breast the tress of

hair which he had found in the river, and holding it up to the light,

replied:

'See, my father, was ever hair like this? Unless I may win and marry

the maiden that owns that lock I must die!'

[Illustration: 'HE NEVER COULD PERSUADE HER TO SAY A SINGLE WORD']

So the king immediately sent heralds throughout all his dominions to

search for the damsel with hair like spun gold; and at last he learned

that she was the daughter of the scent-seller. The object of the

herald's mission was quickly noised abroad, and Dorani heard of it

with the rest; and, one day, she said to her father:

'If the hair is mine, and the king requires me to marry his son, I

must do so; but, remember, you must tell him that if, after the

wedding, I stay all day at the palace, every night will be spent in my

old home.'

The old man listened to her with amazement, but answered nothing, as

he knew she was wiser than he. Of course the hair was Dorani's, and

heralds soon returned and informed the king, their master, who

summoned the scent-seller, and told him that he wished for his

daughter to be given in marriage to the prince. The father bowed his

head three times to the ground, and replied:

'Your highness is our lord, and all that you bid us we will do. The

maiden asks this only--that if, after the wedding, she stays all day

at the palace, she may go back each night to her father's house.'

The king thought this a very strange request; but said to himself it

was, after all, his son's affair, and the girl would surely soon get

tired of going to and fro. So he made no difficulty, and everything

was speedily arranged and the wedding was celebrated with great

rejoicings.

At first, the condition attaching to his wedding with the lovely

Dorani troubled the prince very little, for he thought that he would

at least see his bride all day. But, to his dismay, he found that she

would do nothing but sit the whole time upon a stool with her head

bowed forward upon her knees, and he could never persuade her to say a

single word. Each evening she was carried in a palanquin to her

father's house, and each morning she was brought back soon after

daybreak; and yet never a sound passed her lips, nor did she show by

any sign that she saw, or heard, or heeded her husband.

One evening the prince, very unhappy and troubled, was wandering in an

old and beautiful garden near the palace. The gardener was a very aged

man, who had served the prince's great grandfather; and when he saw

the prince he came and bowed himself to him, and said:

'Child! child! why do you look so sad--is aught the matter?' Then the

prince replied, 'I am sad, old friend, because I have married a wife

as lovely as the stars, but she will not speak to me, and I know not

what to do. Night after night she leaves me for her father's house,

and day after day she sits in mine as though turned to stone, and

utters no word, whatever I may do or say.'

The old man stood thinking for a moment, and then he hobbled off to

his own cottage. A little later he came back to the prince with five

or six small packets, which he placed in his hands and said:

'To-morrow, when your bride leaves the palace, sprinkle the powder

from one of these packets upon your body, and while seeing clearly,

you will become yourself invisible. More I cannot do for you, but may

all go well!'

And the prince thanked him, and put the packets carefully away in his

turban.

The next night, when Dorani left for her father's house in her

palanquin, the prince took out a packet of the magic powder and

sprinkled it over himself, and then hurried after her. He soon found

that, as the old man had promised, he was invisible to everyone,

although he felt as usual, and could see all that passed. He speedily

overtook the palanquin and walked beside it to the scent-seller's

dwelling. There it was set down, and, when his bride, closely veiled,

left it and entered the house, he, too, entered unperceived.

At the first door Dorani removed one veil; then she entered another

doorway at the end of a passage where she removed another veil; next

she mounted the stairs, and at the door of the women's quarters

removed a third veil. After this she proceeded to her own room where

were set two large basins, one of attar of roses and one of water; in

these she washed herself, and afterwards called for food. A servant

brought her a bowl of curds, which she ate hastily, and then arrayed

herself in a robe of silver, and wound about her strings of pearls,

while a wreath of roses crowned her hair. When fully dressed, she

seated herself upon a four-legged stool over which was a canopy with

silken curtains, these she drew around her, and then called out:

'Fly, stool, to the palace of rajah Indra.'

Instantly the stool rose in the air, and the invisible prince, who had

watched all these proceedings with great wonder, seized it by one leg

as it flew away, and found himself being borne through the air at a

rapid rate.

In a short while they arrived at the house of the fairy who, as I told

you before, was the favourite friend of Dorani. The fairy stood

waiting on the threshold, as beautifully dressed as Dorani herself

was, and when the stool stopped at her door she cried in astonishment:

'Why, the stool is flying all crooked to-day! What is the reason of

that, I wonder? I suspect that you have been talking to your husband,

and so it will not fly straight.'

But Dorani declared that she had not spoken one word to him, and she

couldn't think why the stool flew as if weighed down at one side. The

fairy still looked doubtful, but made no answer, and took her seat

beside Dorani, the prince again holding tightly one leg. Then the

stool flew on through the air until it came to the palace of Indra the

rajah.

All through the night the women sang and danced before the rajah

Indra, whilst a magic lute played of itself the most bewitching music;

till the prince, who sat watching it all, was quite entranced. Just

before dawn the rajah gave the signal to cease; and again the two

women seated themselves on the stool, and, with the prince clinging to

the leg, it flew back to earth, and bore Dorani and her husband safely

to the scent-seller's shop. Here the prince hurried away by himself

past Dorani's palanquin with its sleepy bearers, straight on to the

palace; and, as he passed the threshold of his own rooms he became

visible again. Then he lay down upon a couch and waited for Dorani's

arrival.

[Illustration: THE INVISIBLE PRINCE GOES WITH THE LADIES]

As soon as she arrived she took a seat and remained as silent as

usual, with her head bowed on her knees. For a while not a sound was

heard, but presently the prince said:

'I dreamed a curious dream last night, and as it was all about you I

am going to tell it you, although you heed nothing.'

The girl, indeed, took no notice of his words, but in spite of that he

proceeded to relate every single thing that had happened the evening

before, leaving out no detail of all that he had seen or heard. And

when he praised her singing--and his voice shook a little--Dorani just

looked at him; but she said naught, though, in her own mind, she was

filled with wonder. 'What a dream!' she thought. 'Could it have been a

dream? How could he have learnt in a dream all she had done or said?'

Still she kept silent; only she looked that once at the prince, and

then remained all day as before, with her head bowed upon her knees.

When night came the prince again made himself invisible and followed

her. The same things happened again as had happened before, but Dorani

sang better than ever. In the morning the prince a second time told

Dorani all that she had done, pretending that he had dreamt of it.

Directly he had finished Dorani gazed at him, and said:

'Is it true that you dreamt this, or were you really there?'

'I was there,' answered the prince.

'But why do you follow me?' asked the girl.

'Because,' replied the prince, 'I love you, and to be with you is

happiness.'

This time Dorani's eyelids quivered; but she said no more, and was

silent the rest of the day. However, in the evening, just as she was

stepping into her palanquin, she said to the prince:

'If you love me, prove it by not following me to-night.'

And so the prince did as she wished, and stayed at home.

That evening the magic stool flew so unsteadily that they could hardly

keep their seats, and at last the fairy exclaimed:

'There is only one reason that it should jerk like this! You have been

talking to your husband!'

And Dorani replied: 'Yes, I have spoken; oh, yes, I have spoken!' But

no more would she say.

That night Dorani sang so marvellously that at the end the rajah Indra

rose up and vowed that she might ask what she would and he would give

it to her. At first she was silent; but, when he pressed her, she

answered:

'Give me the magic lute.'

The rajah, when he heard this, was displeased with himself for having

made so rash a promise, because this lute he valued above all his

possessions. But as he had promised, so he must perform, and with an

ill grace he handed it to her.

'You must never come here again,' said he, 'for, once having asked so

much, how will you in future be content with smaller gifts?'

Dorani bowed her head silently as she took the lute, and passed with

the fairy out of the great gate, where the stool awaited them. More

unsteadily than before, it flew back to earth.

When Dorani got to the palace that morning she asked the prince

whether he had dreamt again. He laughed with happiness, for this time

she had spoken to him of her own free will; and he replied:

'No; but I begin to dream now--not of what has happened in the past,

but of what may happen in the future.'

That day Dorani sat very quietly, but she answered the prince when he

spoke to her; and when evening fell, and with it the time for her

departure, she still sat on. Then the prince came close to her and

said softly:

'Are you not going to your house, Dorani?'

At that she rose and threw herself weeping into his arms, whispering

gently:

'Never again, my lord, never again would I leave thee!'

So the prince won his beautiful bride; and though they neither of them

dealt any further with fairies and their magic, they learnt more daily

of the magic of Love, which one may still learn, although fairy magic

has fled away.

(Punjâbi Story, Major Campbell, Feroshepore.)


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love requires understanding, communication, and mutual commitment, often transcending the superficial or magical.

Plot Summary

A prince falls in love with a lock of golden, rose-scented hair and marries its owner, Dorani. However, Dorani remains silent and withdrawn, returning to her father's house every night. The prince, using magic invisibility powder, discovers she secretly flies on a magic stool to Indra's palace with a fairy friend to sing and dance. After two nights of 'dreaming' her activities, the prince reveals he was there, and Dorani, testing his love, asks him not to follow her. That night, she asks Indra for his magic lute, sacrificing her access to his palace. She then returns to the prince, finally speaks, and pledges her love, choosing a life with him over her magical past.

Themes

love and devotionmystery and discoverythe power of communicationsacrifice for love

Emotional Arc

sadness and confusion to joy and understanding

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (veils, nights of following), direct address to reader ("as I told you before")

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (initially, prince vs Dorani's silence) and person vs self (Dorani's internal struggle)
Ending: happy
Magic: fairy friend, Indra (as king of fairyland), magic hair, magic invisibility powder, magic flying stool, magic lute
the lock of golden hair (symbol of beauty, mystery, and initial attraction)the magic stool (symbol of Dorani's secret life and freedom)the magic lute (symbol of Dorani's talent and the price of her freedom from Indra)

Cultural Context

Origin: Indian (Punjabi)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story is attributed to Major Campbell, Feroshepore, suggesting a British colonial-era collection of local folklore.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. Dorani, a beautiful maiden with golden, rose-scented hair, lives with her father and is friends with a fairy, both favored by Indra.
  2. Dorani cuts a lock of her hair and throws it into the river; the king's son finds it, falls in love, and vows to marry its owner or die.
  3. Heralds find Dorani, who agrees to marry the prince but insists on returning to her father's house every night.
  4. The wedding occurs, but Dorani remains silent and unresponsive to the prince during the day, returning home nightly.
  5. A wise old gardener gives the distraught prince magic powder to become invisible.
  6. The invisible prince follows Dorani to her father's house, where she sheds veils, washes, and then summons a magic flying stool.
  7. Dorani and her fairy friend fly on the stool to Indra's palace, where they sing and dance all night.
  8. The prince, clinging to the stool, witnesses the entire magical night and returns with Dorani before she knows he was there.
  9. The prince tells Dorani about his 'dream' of her nightly activities, but she remains silent, though internally surprised.
  10. The prince follows her a second night; the next morning, he recounts his 'dream' again, and Dorani asks if he was truly there.
  11. The prince admits he was there, explaining his love, and Dorani asks him to prove his love by not following her that night.
  12. The prince obeys; that night, Dorani sings exceptionally for Indra, who grants her a wish, and she asks for his prized magic lute.
  13. Indra, displeased, gives her the lute but banishes her from his palace.
  14. Dorani returns to the palace, speaks to the prince, and eventually embraces him, promising never to leave again, choosing human love over fairy magic.

Characters 6 characters

Dorani ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Very beautiful, with hair like spun gold that smells of fresh roses.

Attire: Initially simple garments, later robes of silver with strings of pearls and a wreath of roses.

A single strand of golden hair, luminous and fragrant

Secretive, initially passive and silent, but ultimately loving and decisive.

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A young woman in her late teens with long, flowing chestnut hair and bright, determined green eyes. She wears a simple but elegant forest-green tunic dress with a leather belt, brown leggings, and sturdy boots. Her posture is alert and ready, standing tall with one hand resting on her hip. She has a faint, hopeful smile on her face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Prince ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Not explicitly described, but assumed to be handsome and of noble bearing.

Attire: Princely attire, including a turban in which he carries the magic powder.

Holding the lock of golden hair, gazing at it longingly

Persistent, loving, and curious.

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A handsome young man in his early twenties with a strong jawline and bright blue eyes, wearing an ornate royal blue doublet with gold embroidery and silver buttons, fitted white trousers tucked into polished black leather boots, a flowing crimson cape draped over one shoulder, a thin gold circlet resting on his neatly styled short brown hair, standing tall with a confident posture, one hand resting on the hilt of a sword at his side, a gentle yet determined expression on his face, clean-shaven with fair skin, tall and athletic build, royal and noble bearing, soft warm lighting casting a gentle glow, Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature

The King ◆ supporting

human adult male

Not described.

Attire: Royal robes and jewels.

Seated on his throne, listening to his son's plea

Concerned for his son, willing to fulfill his wishes.

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An elderly king in his late sixties with a neatly trimmed white beard and kind, weary eyes. He wears a rich crimson velvet robe trimmed with gold brocade and ermine fur over royal blue tunic and trousers. A simple gold crown rests on his head of white hair. He stands tall but with a slightly stooped posture, one hand resting on a ornate wooden scepter, the other holding a rolled parchment. His expression is thoughtful and benevolent. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Fairy ◆ supporting

fairy ageless female

Beautifully dressed.

Attire: Exquisite fairy garments, richly decorated.

Waiting on the threshold, radiant in fairy attire

Loyal friend, perceptive, somewhat suspicious.

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A young adult female with delicate features and an ageless appearance. She has large, luminous eyes and flowing silver hair adorned with tiny glowing flowers. She wears a layered gown made of iridescent, translucent petals in shades of lavender and mint green, cinched at the waist with a vine belt. Large, dragonfly-like wings with a stained-glass pattern shimmer behind her. She stands in a gentle contrapposto pose, one hand slightly extended as if offering help, her expression kind and serene. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Indra ◆ supporting

magical creature ageless male

Not described.

Attire: Royal attire befitting the king of fairyland.

Seated on his throne in fairyland, surrounded by music and dance

Powerful, generous but also regretful of rash promises.

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A young man with an ethereal, ageless appearance, possessing luminous, pale skin that seems to glow faintly. He has long, flowing silver hair that moves as if stirred by an unseen wind, and his eyes are the deep, swirling grey of a gathering storm. He wears layered robes of celestial blue and white silk, embroidered with subtle, shimmering patterns of lightning bolts and clouds. His posture is calm and regal, standing tall with one hand slightly extended as if offering gentle support or a blessing. His expression is serene, wise, and kindly. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Gardener ◆ supporting

human elderly male

Very aged.

Attire: Simple, worn clothing appropriate for a gardener.

Hobbling with packets of magic powder

Wise, helpful, loyal.

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A middle-aged man with kind, crinkled eyes and a warm, gentle smile. He has sun-kissed skin, short, salt-and-pepper hair, and a neatly trimmed beard. He wears a simple, slightly faded linen shirt with rolled-up sleeves, sturdy brown trousers, and a well-worn leather apron. A straw hat rests on his head. He stands in a relaxed, attentive posture, one hand resting on the handle of a wooden wheelbarrow filled with rich soil and blooming flowers, the other holding a small trowel. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Scent-seller's House

indoor night

A dwelling in a city of Hindustan, with a window overlooking a river. Contains multiple rooms, including a women's quarter and Dorani's private room with basins of attar of roses and water.

Mood: homely, mysterious

Dorani prepares for her nightly journey to Indra's palace; the prince discovers her secret.

river window basins of attar and water multiple veils four-legged stool with silken canopy
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Golden hour light bathes the sandstone facade of a Hindustani haveli, its carved jharokha window open to a view of a wide, slow-moving river. The room within is hinted at through the arch: polished wooden floors, a low table holding gleaming copper basins, and scattered rose petals suggesting attar. Outside, the river ghats bustle with distant, indistinct activity, their steps leading to water reflecting the amber sky. The air feels warm and still, carrying the implied scent of roses. Colors are rich terracotta, deep river blue, and the gold of sunset on stone. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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River below Dorani's Window

outdoor

A river flowing near the city where Dorani lives.

Mood: peaceful, fateful

Dorani throws the lock of hair into the river; the prince finds it.

flowing water large leaf lock of golden hair
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A twilight scene of a winding river flowing through a lush, enchanted valley at the base of a cliff. On the cliff's edge, a silhouette of an ancient, fantastical city with spires and arched bridges is visible, its windows beginning to glow with warm, amber light. The river's surface is glassy, reflecting the deep indigo and purple sky and the first emerging stars. Along the riverbanks, bioluminescent moonflowers and glowing mosses cast soft blue and silver light upon smooth, moss-covered stones. A gentle mist rises from the water's surface. The air feels cool and magical, with a sense of quiet wonder. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Palace Garden

outdoor evening

An old and beautiful garden near the palace.

Mood: melancholy, contemplative

The prince confides in the old gardener and receives the magic powder.

aged gardener's cottage pathways old trees
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Golden hour bathes an ancient palace garden in warm, amber light. A serene atmosphere settles over meticulously kept grounds where weathered stone pathways weave through lush, untamed nature. Enormous, gnarled oak trees draped in Spanish moss frame the scene, their shadows long on the emerald lawn. In the center, a crumbling marble fountain, dry and overgrown with ivy, stands as a silent focal point. Flowering bushes of wisteria and climbing roses spill over ornate, rusted iron gates and crumbling balustrades. Distant, the silhouette of the palace's baroque spires and slate roofs is visible against a soft, peach-and-lavender twilight sky. The air feels still and heavy with the scent of damp earth and night-blooming jasmine. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Indra's Palace

indoor night

A magnificent palace in fairyland.

Mood: magical, enchanting

Dorani sings and dances; she asks for the magic lute and is banished.

magic lute dancing women throne of Rajah Indra
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A grand celestial palace at twilight in an ethereal fairyland, its soaring spires and domes crafted from luminous pearl and moonstone, glowing with an inner soft golden light. The architecture features intricate, flowing organic curves and delicate filigree. It rests upon a floating island of moss-covered marble, surrounded by gentle waterfalls cascading into a misty abyss. The sky is a gradient of deep indigo to rose gold, with two large, softly glowing moons and sparkling nebulae. Bioluminescent flowers dot the lush, otherworldly gardens, and the air shimmers with magical particles. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.