The Escape of the Mouse
by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book
Original Story
THE ESCAPE OF THE MOUSE
MANAWYDDAN the prince and his friend Pryderi were wanderers, for the
brother of Manawyddan had been slain, and his throne taken from him.
Very sorrowful was Manawyddan, but Pryderi was stout of heart, and bade
him be of good cheer, as he knew a way out of his trouble.
'And what may that be?' asked Manawyddan.
'It is that thou marry my mother Rhiannon and become lord of the fair
lands that I will give her for dowry. Never did any lady have more wit
than she, and in her youth none was more lovely; even yet she is good to
look upon.'
'Thou art the best friend that ever a man had,' said Manawyddan. 'Let us
go now to seek Rhiannon, and the lands where she dwells.'
Then they set forth, but the news of their coming ran swifter still, and
Rhiannon and Kicva, wife of Pryderi, made haste to prepare a feast for
them. And Manawyddan found that Pryderi had spoken the truth concerning
his mother, and asked if she would take him for her husband. Right
gladly did she consent, and without delay they were married, and rode
away to the hunt, Rhiannon and Manawyddan, Kicva and Pryderi, and they
would not be parted from each other by night or by day, so great was the
love between them.
One day, when they were returned, they were sitting out in a green
place, and suddenly the crash of thunder struck loudly on their ears,
and a wall of mist fell between them, so that they were hidden one from
the other. Trembling they sat till the darkness fled and the light shone
again upon them, but in the place where they were wont to see cattle,
and herds, and dwellings, they beheld neither house nor beast, nor man
nor smoke; neither was any one remaining in the green place save these
four only.
'Whither have they gone, and my host also?' cried Manawyddan, and they
searched the hall, and there was no man, and the castle, and there was
none, and in the dwellings that were left was nothing save wild beasts.
For a year these four fed on the meat that Manawyddan and Pryderi killed
out hunting, and the honey of the bees that sucked the mountain heather.
For a time they desired nothing more, but when the next year began they
grew weary.
'We cannot spend our lives thus,' said Manawyddan at last, 'let us go
into England and learn some trade by which we may live.' So they left
Wales, and went to Hereford, and there they made saddles, while
Manawyddan fashioned blue enamel ornaments to put on their trappings.
And so greatly did the townsfolk love these saddles, that no others were
bought throughout the whole of Hereford, till the saddlers banded
together and resolved to slay Manawyddan and his companions.
* * * * *
When Pryderi heard of it, he was very wroth, and wished to stay and
fight. But the counsels of Manawyddan prevailed, and they moved by night
to another city.
'What craft shall we follow?' asked Pryderi.
'We will make shields,' answered Manawyddan.
'But do we know anything of that craft?' answered Pryderi.
'We will try it,' said Manawyddan, and they began to make shields, and
fashioned them after the shape of the shields they had seen; and these
likewise they enamelled. And so greatly did they prosper that no man in
the town bought a shield except they had made it, till at length the
shield-makers banded together as the saddlers had done, and resolved to
slay them. But of this they had warning, and by night betook themselves
to another town.
'Let us take to making shoes,' said Manawyddan, 'for there are not any
among the shoemakers bold enough to fight us.'
'I know nothing of making shoes,' answered Pryderi, who in truth
despised so peaceful a craft.
'But I know,' replied Manawyddan, 'and I will teach thee to stitch. We
will buy the leather ready dressed, and will make the shoes from it.'
Then straightway he sought the town for the best leather, and for a
goldsmith to fashion the clasps, and he himself watched till it was
done, so that he might learn for himself. Soon he became known as 'The
Maker of Gold Shoes,' and prospered so greatly, that as long as one
could be bought from him not a shoe was purchased from the shoemakers of
the town. And the craftsmen were wroth, and banded together to slay
them.
'Pryderi,' said Manawyddan, when he had received news of it, 'we will
not remain in England any longer. Let us set forth to Dyved.'
So they journeyed until they came to their lands at Narberth. There they
gathered their dogs round them, and hunted for a year as before.
After that a strange thing happened. One morning Pryderi and Manawyddan
rose up to hunt, and loosened their dogs, which ran before them, till
they came to a small bush. At the bush, the dogs shrank away as if
frightened, and returned to their masters, their hair bristling on their
backs.
'We must see what is in that bush,' said Pryderi, and what was in it was
a boar, with a skin as white as the snow on the mountains. And he came
out, and made a stand as the dogs rushed on him, driven on by the men.
Long he stood at bay; then at last he betook himself to flight, and fled
to a castle which was newly built, in a place where no building had ever
been known. Into the castle he ran, and the dogs after him, and long
though their masters looked and listened, they neither saw nor heard
aught concerning dogs or boar.
'I will go into the castle and get tidings of the dogs,' said Pryderi at
last.
'Truly,' answered Manawyddan, 'thou wouldst do unwisely, for whosoever
has cast a spell over this land has set this castle here.'
'I cannot give up my dogs,' replied Pryderi, and to the castle he went.
But within was neither man nor beast; neither boar nor dogs, but only a
fountain with marble round it, and on the edge a golden bowl, richly
wrought, which pleased Pryderi greatly. In a moment he forgot about his
dogs, and went up to the bowl and took hold of it, and his hands stuck
to the bowl, and his feet to the marble slab, and despair took
possession of him.
Till the close of day Manawyddan waited for him, and when the sun was
fast sinking, he went home, thinking that he had strayed far.
'Where are thy friend and thy dogs?' said Rhiannon, and he told her what
had befallen Pryderi.
'A good friend hast thou lost,' answered Rhiannon, and she went up to
the castle and through the gate, which was open. There, in the centre of
the courtyard, she beheld Pryderi standing, and hastened towards him.
'What dost thou here?' she asked, laying her hand on the bowl, and as
she spoke she too stuck fast, and was not able to utter a word. Then
thunder was heard and a veil of darkness descended upon them, and the
castle vanished and they with it.
When Kicva, the wife of Pryderi, found that neither her husband nor his
mother returned to her, she was in such sorrow that she cared not
whether she lived or died. Manawyddan was grieved also in his heart, and
said to her:
'It is not fitting that we should stay here, for we have lost our dogs
and cannot get food. Let us go into England--it is easier for us to live
there.' So they set forth.
'What craft wilt thou follow?' asked Kicva as they went along.
'I shall make shoes as once I did,' replied he; and he got all the
finest leather in the town and caused gilded clasps to be made for the
shoes, till everyone flocked to buy, and all the shoemakers in the town
were idle and banded together in anger to kill him. But luckily
Manawyddan got word of it, and he and Kicva left the town one night and
proceeded to Narberth, taking with him a sheaf of wheat, which he sowed
in three plots of ground. And while the wheat was growing up, he hunted
and fished, and they had food enough and to spare. Thus the months
passed until the harvest; and one evening Manawyddan visited the
furthest of his fields of wheat; and saw that it was ripe.
'To-morrow I will reap this,' said he; but on the morrow when he went to
reap the wheat he found nothing but the bare straw.
Filled with dismay he hastened to the second field, and there the corn
was ripe and golden.
'To-morrow I will reap this,' he said, but on the morrow the ears had
gone, and there was nothing but the bare straw.
'Well, there is still one field left,' he said, and when he looked at
it, it was still fairer than the other two. 'To-night I will watch
here,' thought he, 'for whosoever carried off the other corn will in
like manner take this, and I will know who it is.' So he hid himself and
waited.
The hours slid by, and all was still, so still that Manawyddan well-nigh
dropped asleep. But at midnight there arose the loudest tumult in the
world, and peeping out he beheld a mighty host of mice, which could
neither be numbered nor measured. Each mouse climbed up a straw till it
bent down with its weight, and then it bit off one of the ears, and
carried it away, and there was not one of the straws that had not got a
mouse to it.
Full of wrath he rushed at the mice, but he could no more come up with
them than if they had been gnats, or birds of the air, save one only
which lingered behind the rest, and this mouse Manawyddan came up with.
Stooping down he seized it by the tail, and put it in his glove, and
tied a piece of string across the opening of the glove, so that the
mouse could not escape. When he entered the hall where Kicva was
sitting, he lighted a fire, and hung the glove up on a peg.
'What hast thou there?' asked she.
'A thief,' he answered, 'that I caught robbing me.'
'What kind of a thief may it be which thou couldst put in thy glove?'
said Kicva.
'That I will tell thee,' he replied, and then he showed her how his
fields of corn had been wasted, and how he had watched for the mice.
'And one was less nimble than the rest, and is now in my glove.
To-morrow I will hang it, and I only wish I had them all.'
'It is a marvel, truly,' said she, 'yet it would be unseemly for a man
of thy dignity to hang a reptile such as this. Do not meddle with it,
but let it go.'
'Woe betide me,' he cried, 'if I would not hang them all if I could
catch them, and such as I have I will hang.'
'Verily,' said she, 'there is no reason that I should succour this
reptile, except to prevent discredit unto thee.'
'If I knew any cause that I should succour it, I would take thy
counsel,' answered Manawyddan, 'but as I know of none, I am minded to
destroy it.'
'Do so then,' said Kicva.
So he went up a hill and set up two forks on the top, and while he was
doing this he saw a scholar coming towards him, whose clothes were
tattered. Now it was seven years since Manawyddan had seen man or beast
in that place, and the sight amazed him.
'Good day to thee, my lord,' said the scholar.
'Good greeting to thee, scholar. Whence dost thou come?'
'From singing in England; but wherefore dost thou ask?'
'Because for seven years no man hath visited this place.'
'I wander where I will,' answered the scholar. 'And what work art thou
upon?'
'I am about to hang a thief that I caught robbing me!'
'What manner of thief is that?' inquired the scholar. 'I see a creature
in thy hand like unto a mouse, and ill does it become a man of thy rank
to touch a reptile like this. Let it go free.'
'I will not let it go free,' cried Manawyddan. 'I caught it robbing me,
and it shall suffer the doom of a thief.'
'Lord!' said the scholar, 'sooner than see a man like thee at such a
work, I would give thee a pound which I have received as alms to let it
go free.'
'I will not let it go free, neither will I sell it.'
'As thou wilt, lord,' answered the scholar, and he went his way.
* * * * *
Manawyddan was placing the cross-beam on the two forked sticks, where
the mouse was to hang, when a priest rode past.
'Good-day to thee, lord; and what art thou doing?'
'I am hanging a thief that I caught robbing me.'
'What manner of thief, lord?'
'A creature in the form of a mouse. It has been robbing me, and it shall
suffer the doom of a thief.'
'Lord,' said the priest, 'sooner than see thee touch this reptile, I
would purchase its freedom.'
'I will neither sell it nor set it free.'
'It is true that a mouse is worth nothing, but rather than see thee
defile thyself with touching such a reptile as this, I will give thee
three pounds for it.'
'I will not take any price for it. It shall be hanged as it deserves.'
'Willingly, my lord, if it is thy pleasure.' And the priest went his
way.
Then Manawyddan noosed the string about the mouse's neck, and was about
to draw it tight when a bishop, with a great following and horses
bearing huge packs, came by.
'What work art thou upon?' asked the bishop, drawing rein.
'Hanging a thief that I caught robbing me.'
'But is not that a mouse that I see in thine hand?' asked the bishop.
'Yes; that is the thief,' answered Manawyddan.
'Well, since I have come at the doom of this reptile, I will ransom it
of thee for seven pounds, rather than see a man of thy rank touch it.
Loose it, and let it go!'
'I will not let it loose.'
'I will give thee four and twenty pounds to set it free,' said the
bishop.
'I will not set it free for as much again.'
'If thou wilt not set it free for this, I will give thee all the horses
thou seest and the seven loads of baggage.'
'I will not set it free.'
'Then tell me at what price thou wilt loose it, and I will give it.'
'The spell must be taken off Rhiannon and Pryderi,' said Manawyddan.
'That shall be done.'
'But not yet will I loose the mouse. The charm that has been cast over
all my lands must be taken off likewise.'
'This shall be done also.'
'But not yet will I loose the mouse till I know who she is.'
'She is my wife,' answered the bishop.
'And wherefore came she to me?' asked Manawyddan.
'To despoil thee,' replied the bishop, 'for it is I who cast the charm
over thy lands, to avenge Gwawl the son of Clud my friend. And it was I
who threw the spell upon Pryderi to avenge Gwawl for the trick that had
been played on him in the game of Badger in the Bag. And not only was I
wroth, but my people likewise, and when it was known that thou wast come
to dwell in the land, they besought me much to change them into mice,
that they might eat thy corn. The first and the second nights it was the
men of my own house that destroyed thy two fields, but on the third
night my wife and her ladies came to me and begged me to change them
also into the shape of mice, that they might take part in avenging
Gwawl. Therefore I changed them. Yet had she not been ill and slow of
foot, thou couldst not have overtaken her. Still, since she was caught,
I will restore thee Pryderi and Rhiannon, and will take the charm from
off thy lands. I have told thee who she is; so now set her free.'
'I will not set her free,' answered Manawyddan, 'till thou swear that no
vengeance shall be taken for this, either upon Pryderi, or upon
Rhiannon, or on me.'
'I grant thee this boon; and thou hast done wisely to ask it, for on thy
head would have lit all the trouble. Set now my wife free.'
'I will not set her free till Pryderi and Rhiannon are with me.'
'Behold, here they come,' said the bishop.
* * * * *
Then Manawyddan held out his hands and greeted Pryderi and Rhiannon, and
they seated themselves joyfully on the grass.
'Ah, lord, hast thou not received all thou didst ask?' said the bishop.
'Set now my wife free!'
'That I will gladly,' answered Manawyddan, unloosing the cord from her
neck, and as he did so the bishop struck her with his staff, and she
turned into a young woman, the fairest that ever was seen.
'Look around upon thy land,' said he, 'and thou wilt see it all tilled
and peopled, as it was long ago.' And Manawyddan looked, and saw corn
growing in the fields, and cows and sheep grazing on the hill-side, and
huts for the people to dwell in. And he was satisfied in his soul, but
one more question he put to the bishop.
'What spell didst thou lay upon Pryderi and Rhiannon?'
'Pryderi has had the knockers of the gate of my palace hung about him,
and Rhiannon has carried the collars of my asses around her neck,' said
the bishop with a smile.
From the 'Mabinogion.'
Story DNA
Moral
Even in the face of overwhelming magical adversity, cunning and persistence can lead to the restoration of what was lost.
Plot Summary
Prince Manawyddan and his family are cursed, their lands depopulated by a magical mist, forcing them to repeatedly flee England after their successful trades incite local jealousy. Upon returning, his friend Pryderi and wife Rhiannon are magically trapped in a phantom castle. Left alone with Pryderi's wife Kicva, Manawyddan plants wheat, only to find it devoured by an army of mice. He catches one mouse, which turns out to be the transformed wife of the enchanter responsible for the curse. Manawyddan uses the captured mouse as leverage, refusing all ransom offers until the enchanter restores his family, his lands, and swears off further vengeance, ultimately succeeding in breaking the powerful spell.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story is an adaptation from the 'Mabinogion,' a collection of medieval Welsh tales, reflecting ancient Celtic mythology and social structures. The theme of magical curses and transformations is common in these narratives.
Plot Beats (15)
- Manawyddan and Pryderi, wanderers, settle in Rhiannon's lands after Manawyddan marries her, forming a happy quartet with Kicva.
- A magical mist descends, depopulating their lands and leaving only the four of them.
- They move to England and become successful saddlers, but local craftsmen conspire against them, forcing them to flee.
- They become successful shield-makers, but again are forced to flee due to local resentment.
- They become successful shoemakers, but once more are forced to flee.
- Returning to their lands, Pryderi pursues a magical white boar into a new castle and becomes stuck to a golden bowl.
- Rhiannon attempts to rescue Pryderi but also becomes stuck and vanishes with him and the castle.
- Manawyddan and Kicva return to England, where Manawyddan again prospers as a shoemaker, but they are forced to flee back to their desolate lands.
- Manawyddan plants three fields of wheat; two are destroyed, and he discovers an army of mice devouring the third.
- Manawyddan catches one mouse, intending to hang it as a thief.
- A scholar, then a priest, offer increasing sums to ransom the mouse, but Manawyddan refuses.
- A bishop offers a large ransom for the mouse, revealing it is his wife and he is the enchanter responsible for the curse.
- Manawyddan demands the release of Pryderi and Rhiannon, the restoration of his lands, and an oath of no vengeance in exchange for the mouse.
- The bishop agrees; Pryderi and Rhiannon reappear, the lands are restored, and the bishop's wife is transformed back.
- Manawyddan learns the details of Pryderi and Rhiannon's magical imprisonment and is satisfied.
Characters
Manawyddan ★ protagonist
Sorrowful, but capable and resourceful
Attire: Princely attire, travel-worn but still dignified; later, simple craftsman's clothing
Patient, wise, strategic
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A noble man in his late thirties with sharp, wise eyes and a neatly trimmed beard. He wears a deep blue woolen tunic with intricate Celtic knotwork embroidery, a brown leather belt with a silver buckle, and a flowing grey cloak draped over his shoulders. His dark hair is shoulder-length and slightly wavy. He stands tall with a confident posture, one hand resting on the hilt of a sheathed sword at his side, and the other holding a wooden staff. His expression is calm yet determined, gazing into the distance. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Pryderi ◆ supporting
Stout of heart, strong and loyal
Attire: Similar to Manawyddan, reflecting his status and travels
Loyal, rash, easily angered
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A young man in his late teens with a thoughtful expression, standing in a relaxed yet attentive pose. He has short, wavy auburn hair and hazel eyes. He wears a simple tunic of deep green wool over dark leggings, with a leather belt at his waist. A small silver crown rests subtly on his head. His posture suggests he is listening intently. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Rhiannon ◆ supporting
Of great wit and still good to look upon
Attire: Fine garments befitting a lady of the land
Wise, regal, beloved
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A middle-aged woman with gentle, wise eyes and soft wrinkles around her smile. Her long, silver-streaked chestnut hair is braided with small wildflowers. She wears a practical, earth-toned linen dress with a leather apron, her sleeves rolled to the elbows. Her posture is calm and welcoming, one hand slightly extended as if offering help. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Kicva ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but implied to be attractive
Attire: Modest but well-kept clothing
Loving, supportive
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A kind-faced middle-aged woman with soft wrinkles around her eyes and a warm, gentle smile. She has shoulder-length, wavy auburn hair tucked behind her ears. She is wearing a simple, long-sleeved cream-colored linen dress with a brown leather belt at her waist, and a faded blue apron. Her posture is slightly leaning forward, as if ready to help, with one hand extended palm-up in a welcoming gesture. She is standing in a rustic cottage kitchen with wooden shelves of jars in the soft background. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Bishop ⚔ antagonist
Powerful and wealthy, with a large retinue
Attire: Elaborate bishop's robes, indicating high status
Vengeful, manipulative, powerful
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An elderly man with a gaunt face, sharp cheekbones, and a thin cruel smile. He wears ornate crimson and gold bishop's robes with dark, sinister embroidery, a heavy gold cross pendant, and a tall, pointed miter hat. His posture is tall and imposing, leaning slightly forward with one hand raised in a gesture of false blessing, the other clutching a dark staff topped with a twisted serpent. His eyes are cold and calculating. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Mouse ○ minor
Small, grey
Desperate, unlucky
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A small, anthropomorphic mouse with soft brown fur and large, round black eyes stands upright on its hind legs. It wears a tiny, well-fitted red vest over a cream-colored shirt, with matching trousers held up by a simple belt. Its expression is one of gentle curiosity, with its head tilted slightly. One paw rests on a miniature satchel slung over its shoulder. It stands in a relaxed, walking pose. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Green Place
A grassy area where Manawyddan, Rhiannon, Pryderi, and Kicva are sitting when a wall of mist and thunder isolates them.
Mood: Initially peaceful, then suddenly eerie and isolating
The magical disappearance of the people, animals, and buildings, leaving only the four protagonists.
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Rolling emerald hills under a soft afternoon sun, dotted with white wildflowers and ancient moss-covered stones. A sudden, thick wall of pearlescent mist rolls across the landscape from the east, swallowing the horizon. Distant thunder rumbles, the sky darkening to bruised purple and grey. The air grows heavy and still, the vibrant greens becoming muted and surreal. A single bolt of lightning illuminates the interior of the advancing mist wall from within, casting an eerie, momentary glow over the isolated grassy hollow. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Narberth Bush
A small, unremarkable bush in the hunting grounds.
Mood: Initially normal, then strange and foreboding
Pryderi and Manawyddan's dogs are frightened by something in the bush, leading to Pryderi's disappearance.
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Late afternoon golden light filters through ancient oaks in a vast hunting forest, illuminating a single, unremarkable hawthorn bush at the edge of a mossy clearing. The bush's dark green leaves are edged with amber, surrounded by ferns and scattered, lichen-covered stones. A narrow, worn animal trail disappears into the deep shadows of towering trees beyond. The air is still, filled with dancing dust motes and the deep, earthy tones of the woodland floor. Soft, dappled sunlight creates a serene, slightly mysterious atmosphere. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Newly Built Castle
A castle that appears suddenly in a place where no building had ever been known.
Mood: Mysterious, magical, and dangerous
Pryderi follows the boar into the castle and disappears after touching the golden bowl.
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A pristine white marble castle with sharp, unweathered spires and gleaming copper roofs rises abruptly from a misty, untouched meadow at dawn. The surrounding ancient forest of towering oaks and mossy stones shows no path or sign of construction. Soft golden morning light filters through lingering ground fog, illuminating dew on the grass and the castle's flawless, freshly cut stone. The air is still and silent, with a sense of magical suddenness. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Hilltop Gallows
A hilltop where Manawyddan is building a makeshift gallows to hang a mouse.
Mood: Tense, absurd, and pivotal
Manawyddan's persistence in hanging the mouse leads to the revelation of the enchantments and the restoration of his lands.
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A windswept hilltop at dusk under an overcast sky. A rough, makeshift gallows stands at the peak, constructed from weathered, gnarled branches lashed together with coarse rope. A single, small noose hangs from the crossbeam, swaying slightly in the cold, persistent breeze. The surrounding grass is sparse and yellowed, flattened by the wind. The landscape is barren and desolate, with distant, misty hills fading into the gloom. The light is fading, casting long, dramatic shadows and bathing the scene in a palette of muted grays, deep browns, and sickly yellows. The atmosphere is heavy, somber, and profoundly eerie. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.