The Castle of Kerglas
by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Peronnik's Magic Quest
Once, a kind boy named Peronnik lived. He had no home. He walked everywhere. He sang happy songs. People liked his songs. They gave him food. Peronnik was always glad. He thanked all. He shared his food with others. Peronnik was curious and brave. He loved to explore. Each day, he walked and sang. He made friends with animals. Peronnik was a good boy. He helped people when he could. He smiled a lot. Peronnik was kind to all. He was always happy. He liked to help.
One day, Peronnik met a Kind Lady. She gave him some bread. Peronnik said thank you. A friendly Knight rode up. He wore shiny armor. The Knight asked the way to Kerglas Castle. The Kind Lady looked scared. She knew about the castle. The Knight wanted a magic bowl and lance. The bowl gave yummy food. The lance was very strong. They belonged to a wizard named Rogar. The Knight said he would get them. He was brave. The Knight rode away. Peronnik listened carefully. He learned about the magic things. The Kind Lady gave Peronnik more food. She told him to be careful. Peronnik was curious about the quest. He wanted to help.
The Kind Lady gave Peronnik more food. A farmer asked Peronnik to watch his cows. Peronnik said yes. He watched the cows near the forest. Each day, he saw a wizard ride by. The wizard was Rogar. He rode a black horse. A little colt followed him. Peronnik liked the colt. He wanted to be friends. Peronnik worked hard. He kept the cows safe. He saw Rogar each day. The colt was magic. Peronnik hoped to meet the colt. He waited and watched.
A wise old bird came to Peronnik. The bird could talk. It taught Peronnik a magic word. The word could call the colt. Peronnik learned the word. He said it softly. The bird smiled. It flew away. Peronnik was happy. He knew the word was special. The bird was very wise. It helped Peronnik on his journey. Peronnik thanked the bird. He practiced the word. The magic word was powerful. Peronnik remembered it well. He was ready to use it. He felt brave.
Peronnik said the magic word. The little colt came to him. The colt was friendly. They became friends. The colt would help Peronnik. Peronnik petted the colt. They played together. The colt was magic. It could talk. Peronnik was glad to have a friend. The colt told Peronnik secrets. It knew the way to the castle. Peronnik trusted the colt. They were a good team. Peronnik felt brave with the colt. They would go on an adventure. They were ready.
Peronnik and the colt entered a magic forest. The forest made silly sounds. It was funny. Peronnik listened to his friend, the colt. The colt knew the way. They walked carefully. The trees moved. The sounds were loud. But Peronnik was not scared. He held the colt's mane. They found the path. The forest was bright and green. The colt guided Peronnik. They saw magic lights. The forest was enchanting. Peronnik enjoyed the journey. He sang a song. The colt listened. They had fun. The path was twisty. But they kept going. Peronnik was determined. The colt was strong. They walked on.
Next, they met a tiny fire friend. The fire friend was bright. It guarded an apple tree. The apples were shiny. Peronnik and the colt were quick. They got a shiny apple. The fire friend smiled. It let them take the apple. Peronnik said thank you. The apple was magic. It could help later. The fire friend was kind. It danced around the tree. Peronnik and the colt worked together. They picked the best apple. The apple glowed softly. Peronnik put it in his bag. The fire friend waved goodbye. Peronnik felt happy. The colt was proud. They continued their journey. They kept going.
Then they found a sleepy lion. The lion was big. It guarded a laughing flower. The flower laughed softly. Peronnik gave the lion the apple. The lion ate it. The lion was happy. It went to sleep. Peronnik picked the laughing flower. The flower was pretty. It made sounds like laughter. The lion was not scary. It was gentle and kind. Peronnik was careful. He thanked the lion. The flower sparkled. Peronnik held it gently. The colt watched happily. They had two magic items now. The apple and the flower. Peronnik felt brave. The colt encouraged him. They moved forward.
Peronnik and the colt came to a river. A Fairy in Black sat on a rock. She wore a pretty black dress. She was kind. She wanted to help Peronnik. She got on the colt with him. The fairy knew the way. She smiled at Peronnik. They crossed the river together. The water was calm. The fairy had magic powers. She could help Peronnik. Peronnik was thankful. He felt safe with her. They rode on the colt. The colt was strong. They went towards the castle. They were close now.
They went to Kerglas Castle. Rogar the wizard was there. He was grumpy. Peronnik gave him the apple. It was a sleepy apple. Rogar ate it. He fell asleep. The Fairy in Black touched him. He slept very deeply. Peronnik and the fairy worked together. They took the magic things. The castle was big and dark. Rogar did not wake up. The fairy used her magic. Peronnik was brave. They found the bowl and lance. The items sparkled brightly. Peronnik held them carefully. The fairy smiled. They had succeeded. Peronnik felt proud. They did it.
Peronnik held the laughing flower. It opened all the doors. He found the magic bowl and lance. They sparkled brightly. The castle shook and sparkled. Peronnik was back by the forest. He had the magic items. The bowl and lance were safe. Peronnik was happy. The flower helped him. The doors opened wide. Peronnik saw the magic things. They glowed with light. The castle made noises. But Peronnik was safe. He went out quickly. The colt was waiting. They left the castle. Peronnik felt excited. He had what he needed. He was ready.
Peronnik went to a town. The town was sad and hungry. Peronnik wanted to help. He used the magic lance. It made a bright, happy light. The light filled the town. He used the magic bowl. It gave yummy food to all. The people were not sad now. The bad times went away. All were happy. They thanked Peronnik. The town had no food. People were crying. Peronnik saw their sadness. He wanted to make them smile. He raised the magic lance. A bright light shone. It chased away the darkness. Then he took the magic bowl. He filled it with food. The bowl never emptied. Food came out for all. People ate and felt better. They danced and sang. The town was full of joy. Peronnik was a hero. He used his magic for good. And he was always happy. The colt helped too. The fairy watched and smiled. Peronnik shared the magic. He taught others to be kind. The town became a happy place. Bad times were gone forever. Everyone was glad.
Peronnik was kind and brave. He helped all. He used his magic for good. And he was always happy. He showed that kindness helps. Anyone can be a hero. He was a good boy.
Original Story
THE CASTLE OF KERGLAS
PERONNIK was a poor idiot who belonged to nobody, and he would have died
of starvation if it had not been for the kindness of the village people,
who gave him food whenever he chose to ask for it. And as for a bed,
when night came, and he grew sleepy, he looked about for a heap of
straw, and making a hole in it, crept in, like a lizard. Idiot though he
was, he was never unhappy, but always thanked gratefully those who fed
him, and sometimes would stop for a little and sing to them. For he
could imitate a lark so well, that no one knew which was Peronnik and
which was the bird.
He had been wandering in a forest one day for several hours, and when
evening approached, he suddenly felt very hungry. Luckily, just at that
place the trees grew thinner, and he could see a small farmhouse a
little way off. Peronnik went straight towards it, and found the
farmer's wife standing at the door holding in her hands the large bowl
out of which her children had eaten their supper.
'I am hungry, will you give me something to eat?' asked the boy.
'If you can find anything here, you are welcome to it,' answered she,
and, indeed, there was not much left, as everybody's spoon had dipped
in. But Peronnik ate what was there with a hearty appetite, and thought
that he had never tasted better food.
'It is made of the finest flour and mixed with the richest milk and
stirred by the best cook in all the countryside,' and though he said it
to himself, the woman heard him.
'Poor innocent,' she murmured, 'he does not know what he is saying, but
I will cut him a slice of that new wheaten loaf,' and so she did, and
Peronnik ate up every crumb, and declared that nobody less than the
bishop's baker could have baked it. This flattered the farmer's wife so
much that she gave him some butter to spread on it, and Peronnik was
still eating it on the doorstep when an armed knight rode up.
'Can you tell me the way to the castle of Kerglas?' asked he.
'To Kerglas? are you really going to Kerglas?' cried the woman,
turning pale.
'Yes; and in order to get there I have come from a country so far off
that it has taken me three months' hard riding to travel as far as
this.'
'And why do you want to go to Kerglas?' said she.
'I am seeking the basin of gold and the lance of diamonds which are in
the castle,' he answered. Then Peronnik looked up.
'The basin and the lance are very costly things,' he said suddenly.
'More costly and precious than all the crowns in the world,' replied the
stranger, 'for not only will the basin furnish you with the best food
that you can dream of, but if you drink of it, it will cure you of any
illness however dangerous, and will even bring the dead back to life, if
it touches their mouths. As to the diamond lance, that will cut through
any stone or metal.'
'And to whom do these wonders belong?' asked Peronnik in amazement.
'To a magician named Rogéar who lives in the castle,' answered the
woman. 'Every day he passes along here, mounted on a black mare, with a
colt thirteen months old trotting behind. But no one dares to attack
him, as he always carries his lance.'
'That is true,' said the knight, 'but there is a spell laid upon him
which forbids his using it within the castle of Kerglas. The moment he
enters, the basin and lance are put away in a dark cellar which no key
but one can open. And that is the place where I wish to fight the
magician.'
'You will never overcome him, Sir Knight,' replied the woman, shaking
her head. 'More than a hundred gentlemen have ridden past this house
bent on the same errand, and not one has ever come back.'
'I know that, good woman,' returned the knight, 'but then they did not
have, like me, instructions from the hermit of Blavet.'
'And what did the hermit tell you?' asked Peronnik.
'He told me that I should have to pass through a wood full of all sorts
of enchantments and voices, which would try to frighten me and make me
lose my way. Most of those who have gone before me have wandered they
know not where, and perished from cold, hunger, or fatigue.'
'Well, suppose you get through safely?' said the idiot.
'If I do,' continued the knight, 'I shall then meet a sort of fairy
armed with a needle of fire which burns to ashes all it touches. This
dwarf stands guarding an apple-tree, from which I am bound to pluck an
apple.'
'And next?' inquired Peronnik.
'Next I shall find the flower that laughs, protected by a lion whose
mane is formed of vipers. I must pluck that flower, and go on to the
lake of the dragons and fight the black man who holds in his hand the
iron ball which never misses its mark and returns of its own accord to
its master. After that, I enter the valley of pleasure, where some who
conquered all the other obstacles have left their bones. If I can win
through this, I shall reach a river with only one ford, where a lady in
black will be seated. She will mount my horse behind me, and tell me
what I am to do next.'
He paused, and the woman shook her head.
'You will never be able to do all that,' said she, but he bade her
remember that these were only matters for men, and galloped away down
the path she pointed out.
* * * * *
The farmer's wife sighed and, giving Peronnik some more food, bade him
good-night. The idiot rose and was opening the gate which led into the
forest when the farmer himself came up.
'I want a boy to tend my cattle,' he said abruptly, 'as the one I had
has run away. Will you stay and do it?' and Peronnik, though he loved
his liberty and hated work, recollected the good food he had eaten, and
agreed to stop.
At sunrise he collected his herd carefully and led them to the rich
pasture which lay along the borders of the forest, cutting himself a
hazel wand with which to keep them in order.
His task was not quite so easy as it looked, for the cows had a way of
straying into the wood, and by the time he had brought one back another
was off. He had gone some distance into the trees, after a naughty black
cow which gave him more trouble than all the rest, when he heard the
noise of horse's feet, and peeping through the leaves he beheld the
giant Rogéar seated on his mare, with the colt trotting behind. Round
the giant's neck hung the golden bowl suspended from a chain, and in his
hand he grasped the diamond lance, which gleamed like fire. But as soon
as he was out of sight the idiot sought in vain for traces of the path
he had taken.
This happened not only once but many times, till Peronnik grew so used
to him that he never troubled to hide. But on each occasion he saw him
the desire to possess the bowl and the lance became stronger.
* * * * *
One evening the boy was sitting alone on the edge of the forest, when a
man with a white beard stopped beside him. 'Do you want to know the way
to Kerglas?' asked the idiot, and the man answered 'I know it well.'
'You have been there without being killed by the magician?' cried
Peronnik.
'Oh! he had nothing to fear from me,' replied the white-bearded man, 'I
am Rogéar's elder brother, the wizard Bryak. When I wish to visit him I
always pass this way, and as even I cannot go through the enchanted wood
without losing myself, I call the colt to guide me.' Stooping down as he
spoke he traced three circles on the ground and murmured some words very
low, which Peronnik could not hear. Then he added aloud:
Colt, free to run and free to eat,
Colt, gallop fast until we meet,
and instantly the colt appeared, frisking and jumping to the wizard, who
threw a halter over his neck and leapt on his back.
* * * * *
Peronnik kept silence at the farm about this adventure, but he
understood very well that if he was ever to get to Kerglas he must first
catch the colt which knew the way. Unhappily he had not heard the magic
words uttered by the wizard, and he could not manage to draw the three
circles, so if he was to summon the colt at all he must invent some
other means of doing it.
All day long, while he was herding the cows, he thought and thought how
he was to call the colt, for he felt sure that once on its back he
could overcome the other dangers. Meantime he must be ready in case a
chance should come, and he made his preparations at night, when every
one was asleep. Remembering what he had seen the wizard do, he patched
up an old halter that was hanging in a corner of the stable, twisted a
rope of hemp to catch the colt's feet, and a net such as is used for
snaring birds. Next he sewed roughly together some bits of cloth to
serve as a pocket, and this he filled with glue and larks' feathers, a
string of beads, a whistle of elder wood, and a slice of bread rubbed
over with bacon fat. Then he went out to the path down which Rogéar, his
mare, and the colt always rode, and crumbled the bread on one side of
it.
Punctual to their hour all three appeared, eagerly watched by Peronnik,
who lay hid in the bushes close by. Suppose it was useless; suppose the
mare, and not the colt, ate the crumbs? Suppose--but no! the mare and
her rider went safely by, vanishing round a corner, while the colt,
trotting along with its head on the ground, smelt the bread, and began
greedily to lick up the pieces. Oh, how good it was! Why had no one ever
given it that before, and so absorbed was the little beast, sniffing
about after a few more crumbs, that it never heard Peronnik creep up
till it felt the halter on its neck and the rope round its feet, and--in
another moment--some one on its back.
Going as fast as the hobbles would allow, the colt turned into one of
the wildest parts of the forest, while its rider sat trembling at the
strange sights he saw. Sometimes the earth seemed to open in front of
them and he was looking into a bottomless pit; sometimes the trees burst
into flames and he found himself in the midst of a fire; often in the
act of crossing a stream the water rose and threatened to sweep him
away; and again, at the foot of a mountain, great rocks would roll
towards him, as if they would crush him and his colt beneath their
weight. To his dying day Peronnik never knew whether these things were
real or if he only imagined them, but he pulled down his knitted cap so
as to cover his eyes, and trusted the colt to carry him down the right
road.
At last the forest was left behind, and they came out on a wide plain
where the air blew fresh and strong. The idiot ventured to peep out, and
found to his relief that the enchantments seemed to have ended, though a
thrill of horror shot through him as he noticed the skeletons of men
scattered over the plain, beside the skeletons of their horses. And what
were those grey forms trotting away in the distance? Were they--could
they be--wolves?
But vast though the plain seemed, it did not take long to cross, and
very soon the colt entered a sort of shady park in which was standing a
single apple-tree, its branches bowed down to the ground with the weight
of its fruit. In front was the korigan--the little fairy man--holding in
his hand the fiery sword, which reduced to ashes everything it touched.
At the sight of Peronnik he uttered a piercing scream, and raised his
sword, but without appearing surprised the youth only lifted his cap,
though he took care to remain at a little distance.
'Do not be alarmed, my prince,' said Peronnik, 'I am just on my way to
Kerglas, as the noble Rogéar has begged me to come to him on business.'
'Begged you to come!' repeated the dwarf, 'and who, then, are you?'
'I am the new servant he has engaged, as you know very well,' answered
Peronnik.
'I do not know at all,' rejoined the korigan sulkily, 'and you may be a
robber for all I can tell.'
'I am so sorry,' replied Peronnik, 'but I may be wrong in calling myself
a servant, for I am only a bird-catcher. But do not delay me, I pray,
for his highness the magician expects me, and, as you see, has lent me
his colt so that I may reach the castle all the quicker.'
At these words the korigan cast his eyes for the first time on the colt,
which he knew to be the one belonging to the magician, and began to
think that the young man was speaking the truth. After examining the
horse, he studied the rider, who had such an innocent, and indeed
vacant, air that he appeared incapable of inventing a story. Still, the
dwarf did not feel quite sure that all was right, and asked what the
magician wanted with a bird-catcher.
'From what he says, he wants one very badly,' replied Peronnik, 'as he
declares that all his grain and all the fruit in his garden at Kerglas
are eaten up by the birds.'
'And how are you going to stop that, my fine fellow?' inquired the
korigan; and Peronnik showed him the snare he had prepared, and remarked
that no bird could possibly escape from it.
'That is just what I should like to be sure of,' answered the korigan.
'My apples are completely eaten up by blackbirds and thrushes. Lay your
snare, and if you can manage to catch them, I will let you pass.'
'That is a fair bargain,' and as he spoke Peronnik jumped down and
fastened his colt to a tree; then, stooping, he fixed one end of the net
to the trunk of the apple-tree, and called to the korigan to hold the
other while he took out the pegs. The dwarf did as he was bid, when
suddenly Peronnik threw the noose over his neck and drew it close, and
the korigan was held as fast as any of the birds he wished to snare.
Shrieking with rage, he tried to undo the cord, but he only pulled the
knot tighter. He had put down the sword on the grass, and Peronnik had
been careful to fix the net on the other side of the tree, so that it
was now easy for him to pluck an apple and to mount his horse, without
being hindered by the dwarf, whom he left to his fate.
* * * * *
When they had left the plain behind them, Peronnik and his steed found
themselves in a narrow valley in which was a grove of trees, full of all
sorts of sweet-smelling things--roses of every colour, yellow broom,
pink honeysuckle--while above them all towered a wonderful scarlet pansy
whose face bore a strange expression. This was the flower that laughs,
and no one who looked at it could help laughing too. Peronnik's heart
beat high at the thought that he had reached safely the second trial,
and he gazed quite calmly at the lion with the mane of vipers twisting
and twirling, who walked up and down in front of the grove.
The young man pulled up and removed his cap, for, idiot though he was,
he knew that when you have to do with people greater than yourself, a
cap is more useful in the hand than on the head. Then, after wishing all
kinds of good fortune to the lion and his family, he inquired if he was
on the right road to Kerglas.
'And what is your business at Kerglas?' asked the lion with a growl, and
showing his teeth.
'With all respect,' answered Peronnik, pretending to be very frightened,
'I am the servant of a lady who is a friend of the noble Rogéar and
sends him some larks for a pasty.'
'Larks?' cried the lion, licking his long whiskers. 'Why, it must be a
century since I have had any! Have you a large quantity with you?'
'As many as this bag will hold,' replied Peronnik, opening, as he spoke,
the bag which he had filled with feathers and glue; and to prove what he
said, he turned his back on the lion and began to imitate the song of a
lark.
'Come,' exclaimed the lion, whose mouth watered, 'show me the birds! I
should like to see if they are fat enough for my master.'
'I would do it with pleasure,' answered the idiot, 'but if I once open
the bag they will all fly away.'
'Well, open it wide enough for me to look in,' said the lion, drawing a
little nearer.
[Illustration: How Peronnik tricked the Viper-maned Lion with a bag]
Now this was just what Peronnik had been hoping for, so he held the bag
while the lion opened it carefully and put his head right inside, so
that he might get a good mouthful of larks. But the mass of feathers and
glue stuck to him, and before he could pull his head out again Peronnik
had drawn tight the cord, and tied it in a knot that no man could untie.
Then, quickly gathering the flower that laughs, he rode off as fast as
the colt could take him.
* * * * *
The path soon led to the lake of the dragons, which he had to swim
across. The colt, who was accustomed to it, plunged into the water
without hesitation; but as soon as the dragons caught sight of Peronnik
they approached from all parts of the lake in order to devour him.
This time Peronnik did not trouble to take off his cap, but he threw the
beads he carried with him into the water, as you throw black corn to a
duck, and with each bead that he swallowed a dragon turned on his back
and died, so that the idiot reached the other side without further
trouble.
The valley guarded by the black man now lay before him, and from afar
Peronnik beheld him, chained by one foot to a rock at the entrance, and
holding the iron ball which never missed its mark and always returned to
its master's hand. In his head the black man had six eyes that were
never all shut at once, but kept watch one after the other. At this
moment they were all open, and Peronnik knew well that if the black man
caught a glimpse of him he would cast his ball. So, hiding the colt
behind a thicket of bushes, he crawled along a ditch and crouched close
to the very rock to which the black man was chained.
The day was hot, and after a while the man began to grow sleepy. Two of
his eyes closed, and Peronnik sang gently. In a moment a third eye shut,
and Peronnik sang on. The lid of a fourth eye dropped heavily, and then
those of the fifth and the sixth. The black man was asleep altogether.
Then, on tiptoe, the idiot crept back to the colt, which he led over
soft moss past the black man into the vale of pleasure, a delicious
garden full of fruits that dangled before your mouth, fountains running
with wine, and flowers chanting in soft little voices. Further on,
tables were spread with food, and girls dancing on the grass called to
him to join them.
Peronnik heard, and, scarcely knowing what he did drew the colt into a
slower pace. He sniffed greedily the smell of the dishes, and raised his
head the better to see the dancers. Another instant and he would have
stopped altogether and been lost, like others before him, when suddenly
there came to him like a vision the golden bowl and the diamond lance.
Drawing his whistle from his pocket, he blew it loudly, so as to drown
the sweet sounds about him, and ate what was left of his bread and bacon
to still the craving of the magic fruits. His eyes he fixed steadily on
the ears of the colt, that he might not see the dancers.
In this way he was able to reach the end of the garden, and at length
perceived the castle of Kerglas, with the river between them which had
only one ford. Would the lady be there, as the old man had told him?
Yes, surely that was she, sitting on a rock, in a black satin dress, and
her face the colour of a Moorish woman's. The idiot rode up, and took
off his cap more politely than ever, and asked if she did not wish to
cross the river.
'I was waiting for you to help me do so,' answered she. 'Come near, that
I may get up behind you.'
Peronnik did as she bade him, and by the help of his arm she jumped
nimbly on to the back of the colt.
'Do you know how to kill the magician?' asked the lady, as they were
crossing the ford.
'I thought that, being a magician, he was immortal, and that no one
could kill him,' replied Peronnik.
'Persuade him to taste that apple, and he will die, and if that is not
enough I will touch him with my finger, for I am the plague,' answered
she.
'But if I kill him, how am I to get the golden bowl and the diamond
lance that are hidden in the cellar without a key?' rejoined Peronnik.
[Illustration: PERONNIK IN THE VALE OF PLEASURE]
[Illustration: The Lady in black slays Rogéar the Magician]
'The flower that laughs opens all doors and lightens all darkness,' said
the lady; and as she spoke, they reached the further bank, and
advanced towards the castle.
In front of the entrance was a sort of tent supported on poles, and
under it the giant was sitting, basking in the sun. As soon as he
noticed the colt bearing Peronnik and the lady, he lifted his head, and
cried in a voice of thunder:
'Why, it is surely the idiot, riding my colt thirteen months old!'
'Greatest of magicians, you are right,' answered Peronnik.
'And how did you manage to catch him?' asked the giant.
'By repeating what I learnt from your brother Bryak on the edge of the
forest,' replied the idiot. 'I just said--
Colt, free to run and free to eat,
Colt, gallop fast until we meet,
and it came directly.'
'You know my brother, then?' inquired the giant. 'Tell me why he sent
you here.'
'To bring you two gifts which he has just received from the country of
the Moors,' answered Peronnik: 'the apple of delight and the woman of
submission. If you eat the apple you will not desire anything else, and
if you take the woman as your servant you will never wish for another.'
'Well, give me the apple, and bid the woman get down,' answered Rogéar.
The idiot obeyed, but at the first taste of the apple the giant
staggered, and as the long yellow finger of the woman touched him he
fell dead.
Leaving the magician where he lay, Peronnik entered the palace, bearing
with him the flower that laughs. Fifty doors flew open before him, and
at length he reached a long flight of steps which seemed to lead into
the bowels of the earth. Down these he went till he came to a silver
door without a bar or key. Then he held up high the flower that laughs,
and the door slowly swung back, displaying a deep cavern, which was as
bright as day from the shining of the golden bowl and the diamond lance.
The idiot hastily ran forward and hung the bowl round his neck from the
chain which was attached to it, and took the lance in his hand. As he
did so, the ground shook beneath him, and with an awful rumbling the
palace disappeared, and Peronnik found himself standing close to the
forest where he led the cattle to graze.
* * * * *
Though darkness was coming on, Peronnik never thought of entering the
farm, but followed the road which led to the court of the duke of
Brittany. As he passed through the town of Vannes he stopped at a
tailor's shop, and bought a beautiful costume of brown velvet and a
white horse, which he paid for with a handful of gold that he had picked
up in the corridor of the castle of Kerglas. Thus he made his way to the
city of Nantes, which at that moment was besieged by the French.
A little way off, Peronnik stopped and looked about him. For miles round
the country was bare, for the enemy had cut down every tree and burnt
every blade of corn; and, idiot though he might be, Peronnik was able to
grasp that inside the gates men were dying of famine. He was still
gazing with horror, when a trumpeter appeared on the walls, and, after
blowing a loud blast, announced that the duke would adopt as his heir
the man who could drive the French out of the country.
On the four sides of the city the trumpeter blew his blast, and the last
time Peronnik, who had ridden up as close as he might, answered him.
'You need blow no more,' said he, 'for I myself will free the town from
her enemies.' And turning to a soldier who came running up, waving his
sword, he touched him with the magic lance, and he fell dead on the
spot. The men who were following stood still, amazed. Their comrade's
armour had not been pierced, of that they were sure, yet he was dead, as
if he had been struck to the heart. But before they had time to recover
from their astonishment, Peronnik cried out:
'You see how my foes will fare; now behold what I can do for my
friends,' and, stooping down, he laid the golden bowl against the mouth
of the soldier, who sat up as well as ever. Then, jumping his horse
across the trench, he entered the gate of the city, which had opened
wide enough to receive him.
The news of these marvels quickly spread through the town, and put fresh
spirit into the garrison, so that they declared themselves able to fight
under the command of the young stranger. And as the bowl restored all
the dead Bretons to life, Peronnik soon had an army large enough to
drive away the French, and fulfilled his promise of delivering his
country.
As to the bowl and the lance, no one knows what became of them, but some
say that Bryak the sorcerer managed to steal them again, and that any
one who wishes to possess them must seek them as Peronnik did.
From 'Le Foyer Breton,' par Emile Souvestre.
Story DNA
Moral
Even the simplest and most overlooked individuals can achieve greatness through courage, wit, and perseverance, especially when driven by a noble purpose.
Plot Summary
Peronnik, a kind but simple-minded orphan, overhears a knight's quest for powerful magical artifacts—a golden bowl and diamond lance—hidden in the dangerous Castle of Kerglas. Inspired, he embarks on his own quest, first learning to summon a magical colt from the magician Rogéar's brother. With the colt as his guide, Peronnik navigates a series of perilous magical trials, including an enchanted wood, a fire dwarf, a viper-maned lion, and a six-eyed guardian, using his wit and courage. He eventually meets the Lady in Black, who helps him trick and defeat Rogéar, allowing Peronnik to retrieve the artifacts from the collapsing castle. Now empowered, Peronnik uses the magical bowl and lance to save the besieged city of Nantes, reviving its fallen defenders and driving away the invaders, proving that even the most underestimated can achieve greatness.
Themes
Emotional Arc
underestimation to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The siege of Nantes by the French is a historical event, grounding the fantastical elements in a specific regional conflict, though the magical resolution is purely fictional.
Plot Beats (15)
- Peronnik, a kind but simple-minded orphan, wanders, singing like a lark and living on charity.
- He encounters a farmer's wife and an armed knight seeking the Castle of Kerglas for a golden bowl and diamond lance, learning of their magical properties and the perils of the quest.
- Peronnik takes a job as a cowherd and repeatedly observes the magician Rogéar, the owner of the artifacts, riding his black mare and magical colt.
- He meets Rogéar's brother, Bryak, who reveals the incantation to summon the magical colt.
- Peronnik uses the incantation to capture the colt, which becomes his guide and companion for the quest.
- He enters the enchanted wood, overcoming its illusions and voices by focusing on the colt.
- He faces the fire dwarf guarding the apple tree, using the colt's speed to snatch an apple.
- He confronts the viper-maned lion guarding the laughing flower, using the apple to distract it and pluck the flower.
- He encounters the six-eyed black man guarding the lake of dragons, lulling him to sleep with song to pass safely.
- He resists the temptations of the Vale of Pleasure by focusing on his goal and using his whistle and food.
- He reaches the river and meets the Lady in Black (the Plague), who agrees to help him defeat Rogéar.
- Peronnik and the Lady confront Rogéar, tricking him into eating a poisoned apple, and the Lady kills him with a touch.
- Peronnik uses the 'flower that laughs' to open the hidden cellar, retrieving the golden bowl and diamond lance as the castle collapses.
- Now wealthy and equipped with magic, Peronnik travels to Nantes, which is under siege and suffering from famine.
- He uses the diamond lance to kill an enemy soldier and the golden bowl to revive him, inspiring the city's defenders and leading them to victory against the French.
Characters
Peronnik ★ protagonist
Poor, initially described as an 'idiot', but capable of imitating a lark perfectly.
Attire: Starts in rags, later buys a beautiful costume of brown velvet.
Grateful, initially simple-minded but proves to be clever and resourceful, brave.
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A young man in his late teens with a determined expression, standing tall in a confident pose. He has short, tousled brown hair and clear, observant eyes. He wears a simple, earth-toned tunic over dark trousers, with a leather belt at his waist. A small, worn leather satchel is slung over his shoulder. His sturdy boots are planted firmly on the ground, suggesting readiness for a journey. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Rogéar ⚔ antagonist
A giant magician.
Attire: Not specified, but likely clothing befitting a powerful magician.
Powerful, arrogant, easily tricked.
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A tall, imposing male figure in his late 30s with sharp, angular features and pale skin. He has slicked-back black hair and cold, calculating grey eyes. He wears a tailored black coat with a high collar and silver embroidery, over dark trousers and polished boots. His posture is rigid and authoritative, one hand resting on the hilt of a slender, ornate sword at his hip. A faint, cruel smirk plays on his thin lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Knight ◆ supporting
Armed, determined.
Attire: Full knightly armor.
Brave, determined, follows instructions.
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A male knight in his late twenties with short brown hair visible beneath a simple steel helmet. He wears a sleeveless chainmail shirt over a padded gambeson, with a dark blue woolen tabard bearing no heraldry. His posture is upright and alert, one hand resting on the pommel of a sheathed longsword at his hip, the other holding a wooden practice shield. He has a calm, watchful expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Farmer's Wife ◆ supporting
Kind, generous.
Attire: Typical peasant dress of the time.
Kind, generous, superstitious.
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A middle-aged woman with kind eyes and a warm, gentle smile. She has soft brown hair neatly pinned up under a simple linen headscarf. She wears a practical, faded blue dress with a clean white apron tied at the waist, the sleeves rolled up to her elbows. Her posture is sturdy yet relaxed, standing with one hand resting on a woven basket filled with fresh garden vegetables. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Lady in Black ◆ supporting
Face the color of a Moorish woman's, described as the plague.
Attire: Black satin dress.
Deadly, helpful to Peronnik.
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A mature woman in her late 30s with an elegant, composed posture. She wears a tailored black gown with a high neckline and long sleeves, adorned with subtle lace detailing at the cuffs and collar. A wide-brimmed black hat with a small veil partially shadows her serene, unreadable expression. Her dark hair is swept up in a neat chignon. She holds a single white rose loosely in one hand. Her gaze is directed slightly off-camera, conveying quiet observation. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Farmer's House Doorstep
A small farmhouse with the farmer's wife standing at the door, holding a bowl. A knight arrives on horseback.
Mood: hospitable, curious
Peronnik learns about the Castle of Kerglas and the treasures within.
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Evening light bathes a small thatched-roof farmhouse, its sturdy wooden door slightly ajar. A stone path leads to the doorstep, where a rustic clay bowl sits beside a worn wooden stool. Warm, golden sunlight filters through the leaves of an old oak tree, casting long shadows across the mossy ground. Wildflowers dot the lush green grass, and a wisp of smoke curls from the stone chimney. The distant forest is silhouetted against a soft orange and purple twilight sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Forest with Enchantments
A wood full of enchantments and voices, designed to frighten travelers and make them lose their way. Contains a fairy guarding an apple tree with a needle of fire.
Mood: eerie, dangerous, magical
The Knight must pass through this forest to reach the castle.
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A twilight forest of twisted, gnarled trees with bark like scowling faces, their branches interlocking overhead to form a shadowy, disorienting canopy. A thick, luminescent mist clings to the ground, swirling around patches of faintly glowing, bioluminescent mushrooms. In a central clearing stands a single, ancient apple tree, its bark blackened and gnarled, bearing luminous, ruby-red apples. From the branches hang needles of cold, blue-white fire, casting an eerie, shifting light. The atmosphere is deeply unsettling, with deep greens and purples pierced by the sharp, unnatural glow of the fiery needles and enchanted fruit. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Castle of Kerglas Entrance
A tent supported on poles in front of the entrance, where the magician Rogéar sits basking in the sun.
Mood: deceptive, ominous
Peronnik tricks and kills the magician Rogéar.
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A grand stone castle entrance with a weathered archway, flanked by towering turrets under a bright midday sun. Before the arch, a vibrant crimson tent is erected on tall, polished wooden poles, its fabric gently billowing in a light breeze. The sun casts sharp shadows from the tent onto the sun-drenched cobblestone courtyard. Lush green grass grows between the stones, and a few wildflowers dot the landscape. The sky is a clear, vivid blue with a few wispy clouds. The castle walls are made of grey, moss-covered stone, with ivy climbing partway up. The scene is peaceful, bathed in warm, golden sunlight. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Cellar of Kerglas
A deep cavern, as bright as day from the shining of the golden bowl and the diamond lance. Reached by a long flight of steps and a silver door.
Mood: magical, treasure-filled
Peronnik retrieves the golden bowl and diamond lance.
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A grand silver door, slightly ajar, reveals a descending flight of ancient stone steps leading into a vast, deep cavern. The chamber is illuminated as bright as midday by two central magical artifacts: a radiant golden bowl pulsing with warm light and a towering diamond lance refracting brilliant, crystalline beams across the walls. The light catches on damp, glittering stalactites and stalagmites, casting long, sharp shadows. The cavern floor is smooth, polished stone, reflecting the golden and diamond glow. Patches of faintly glowing bioluminescent moss cling to the rough-hewn walls, adding subtle blue-green highlights. The air feels still, ancient, and mystical. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Besieged City of Nantes
A city under siege, with bare country for miles around. The enemy has cut down every tree and burnt every blade of corn. Trumpeters on the walls.
Mood: desperate, war-torn
Peronnik uses the bowl and lance to save the city.
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A besieged medieval city at dusk, its stone walls and tall towers silhouetted against a blood-red sunset. The surrounding landscape is a vast, barren plain of scorched earth and trampled mud, completely devoid of trees or crops. Siege engines and distant campfires dot the horizon. A heavy, smoky haze hangs in the air. On the battlements, tattered banners flutter beside silent trumpets. The color palette is dominated by ashen grays, deep browns, and the ominous crimson of the sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.