Prince Fickle and Fair Helena

by Andrew Lang · from The Green Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1891 words 9 min read
Cover: Prince Fickle and Fair Helena

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 267 words 2 min Canon 95/100

Once upon a time, there was a kind girl named Helena. Her stepmother was unkind to her. She gave Helena hard work to do.

One day, a kind Fairy came to help. She sorted feathers for Helena. She emptied a pond for her. She built a beautiful castle for her.

The stepmother went away. Helena lived in her castle. A prince named Fickle liked her. They were happy together.

He had to go home. He promised to come back. Helena kissed his left cheek. She asked him not to let anyone else kiss him there. She waited under the lime-tree.

He did not come back. Helena felt very sad. She left her castle.

She took her pretty dresses. She went to a new place. She helped with animals there. She had a little calf.

She taught the calf a song. "Kneel, little calf, kneel. Be faithful and leal. Not like Prince Fickle, Who left his Helena."

She heard the prince would marry a princess. He rode past her every day. Helena sang her song for him. He did not remember her.

There was a big party. Helena went to the party. She wore a dress with suns. The prince danced with her.

The next night she went again. She wore a dress with moons. The prince liked her very much.

On the third night, she wore stars. The prince asked her name. Helena kissed his left cheek. He remembered Helena!

He said he was sorry. Helena forgave him. They got married. They went back to her castle. They lived happily ever after.

True love finds a way.

Original Story 1891 words · 9 min read

PRINCE FICKLE AND FAIR HELENA

(FROM THE GERMAN)

There was once upon a time a beautiful girl called Helena. Her own

mother had died when she was quite a child, and her stepmother was as

cruel and unkind to her as she could be. Helena did all she could to

gain her love, and performed the heavy work given her to do cheerfully

and well; but her stepmother's heart wasn't in the least touched, and

the more the poor girl did the more she asked her to do.

One day she gave Helena twelve pounds of mixed feathers and bade her

separate them all before evening, threatening her with a heavy

punishment if she failed to do so.

The poor child sat down to her task with her eyes so full of tears that

she could hardly see to begin. And when she had made one little heap of

feathers, she sighed so deeply that they all blew apart again. And so it

went on, and the poor girl grew more and more miserable. She bowed her

head in her hands and cried, 'Is there no one under heaven who will take

pity on me?'

Suddenly a soft voice replied, 'Be comforted, my child: I have come to

help you.'

Terrified to death, Helena looked up and saw a Fairy standing in front

of her, who asked in the kindest way possible, 'Why are you crying, my

dear?'

Helena, who for long had heard no friendly voice, confided her sad tale

of woe to the Fairy, and told her what the new task she had been given

to do was, and how she despaired of ever accomplishing it.

'Don't worry yourself about it any more,' said the kind Fairy; 'lie down

and go to sleep, and I'll see that your work is done all right.' So

Helena lay down, and when she awoke all the feathers were sorted into

little bundles; but when she turned to thank the good Fairy she had

vanished.

In the evening her stepmother returned and was much amazed to find

Helena sitting quietly with her work all finished before her.

[Illustration]

She praised her diligence, but at the same time racked her brain as to

what harder task she could set her to do.

The next day she told Helena to empty a pond near the house with a spoon

which was full of holes. Helena set to work at once, but she very soon

found that what her stepmother had told her to do was an impossibility.

Full of despair and misery, she was in the act of throwing the spoon

away, when suddenly the kind Fairy stood before her again, and asked her

why she was so unhappy?

When Helena told her of her stepmother's new demand she said, 'Trust to

me and I will do your task for you. Lie down and have a sleep in the

meantime.'

Helena was comforted and lay down, and before you would have believed it

possible the Fairy roused her gently and told her the pond was empty.

Full of joy and gratitude, Helena hurried to her stepmother, hoping that

now at last her heart would be softened towards her. But the wicked

woman was furious at the frustration of her own evil designs, and only

thought of what harder thing she could set the girl to do.

Next morning she ordered her to build before evening a beautiful castle,

and to furnish it all from garret to basement. Helena sat down on the

rocks which had been pointed out to her as the site of the castle,

feeling very depressed, but at the same time with the lurking hope that

the kind Fairy would come once more to her aid.

And so it turned out. The Fairy appeared, promised to build the castle,

and told Helena to lie down and go to sleep in the meantime. At the word

of the Fairy the rocks and stones rose and built themselves into a

beautiful castle, and before sunset it was all furnished inside, and

left nothing to be desired. You may think how grateful Helena was when

she awoke and found her task all finished.

But her stepmother was anything but pleased, and went through the whole

castle from top to bottom, to see if she couldn't find some fault for

which she could punish Helena. At last she went down into one of the

cellars, but it was so dark that she fell down the steep stairs and was

killed on the spot.

So Helena was now mistress of the beautiful castle, and lived there in

peace and happiness. And soon the noise of her beauty spread abroad, and

many wooers came to try and gain her hand.

Among them came one Prince Fickle by name, who very quickly won the love

of fair Helena. One day, as they were sitting happily together under a

lime-tree in front of the castle, Prince Fickle broke the sad news to

Helena that he must return to his parents to get their consent to his

marriage. He promised faithfully to come back to her as soon as he

could, and begged her to await his return under the lime-tree where they

had spent so many happy hours.

Helena kissed him tenderly at parting on his left cheek, and begged him

not to let anyone else kiss him there while they were parted, and she

promised to sit and wait for him under the lime-tree, for she never

doubted that the Prince would be faithful to her and would return as

quickly as he could.

And so she sat for three days and three nights under the tree without

moving. But when her lover never returned, she grew very unhappy, and

determined to set out to look for him. She took as many of her jewels as

she could carry, and three of her most beautiful dresses, one

embroidered with stars, one with moons, and the third with suns, all of

pure gold. Far and wide she wandered through the world, but nowhere did

she find any trace of her bridegroom. At last she gave up the search in

despair. She could not bear to return to her own castle where she had

been so happy with her lover, but determined rather to endure her

loneliness and desolation in a strange land. She took a place as

herd-girl with a peasant, and buried her jewels and beautiful dresses in

a safe and hidden spot.

Every day she drove the cattle to pasture, and all the time she thought

of nothing but her faithless bridegroom. She was very devoted to a

certain little calf in the herd, and made a great pet of it, feeding it

out of her own hands. She taught it to kneel before her, and then she

whispered in its ear:

'Kneel, little calf, kneel;

Be faithful and leal,

Not like Prince Fickle,

Who once on a time

Left his fair Helena

Under the lime.'

After some years passed in this way, she heard that the daughter of the

king of the country she was living in was going to marry a Prince called

'Fickle.' Everybody rejoiced at the news except poor Helena, to whom it

was a fearful blow, for at the bottom of her heart she had always

believed her lover to be true.

Now it chanced that the way to the capital led right past the village

where Helena was, and often when she was leading her cattle forth to the

meadows Prince Fickle rode past her, without ever noticing the poor

herd-girl, so engrossed was he in thoughts of his new bride. Then it

occurred to Helena to put his heart to the test and to see if it weren't

possible to recall herself to him. So one day as Prince Fickle rode by

she said to her little calf:

'Kneel, little calf, kneel;

Be faithful and leal,

Not like Prince Fickle,

Who once on a time

Left his poor Helena

Under the lime.'

When Prince Fickle heard her voice it seemed to him to remind him of

something, but of what he couldn't remember, for he hadn't heard the

words distinctly, as Helena had only spoken them very low and with a

shaky voice. Helena herself had been far too moved to let her see what

impression her words had made on the Prince, and when she looked round

he was already far away. But she noticed how slowly he was riding, and

how deeply sunk he was in thought, so she didn't quite give herself up

as lost.

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In honour of the approaching wedding a feast lasting many nights was to

be given in the capital. Helena placed all her hopes on this, and

determined to go to the feast and there to seek out her bridegroom.

When evening drew near she stole out of the peasant's cottage secretly,

and, going to her hiding-place, she put on her dress embroidered with

the gold suns, and all her jewels, and loosed her beautiful golden hair,

which up to now she had always worn under a kerchief, and, adorned thus,

she set out for the town.

When she entered the ball-room all eyes were turned on her, and everyone

marvelled at her beauty, but no one knew who she was. Prince Fickle,

too, was quite dazzled by the charms of the beautiful maiden, and never

guessed that she had once been his own lady-love. He never left her side

all night, and it was with great difficulty that Helena escaped from him

in the crowd when it was time to return home. Prince Fickle searched for

her everywhere, and longed eagerly for the next night, when the

beautiful lady had promised to come again.

The following evening the fair Helena started early for the feast.

This time she wore her dress embroidered with silver moons, and in her

hair she placed a silver crescent. Prince Fickle was enchanted to see

her again, and she seemed to him even more beautiful than she had been

the night before. He never left her side, and refused to dance with

anyone else. He begged her to tell him who she was, but this she refused

to do. Then he implored her to return again next evening, and this she

promised him she would.

On the third evening Prince Fickle was so impatient to see his fair

enchantress again, that he arrived at the feast hours before it began,

and never took his eyes from the door. At last Helena arrived in a dress

all covered with gold and silver stars, and with a girdle of stars round

her waist, and a band of stars in her hair. Prince Fickle was more in

love with her than ever, and begged her once again to tell him her name.

Then Helena kissed him silently on the left cheek, and in one moment

Prince Fickle recognised his old love. Full of remorse and sorrow, he

begged for her forgiveness, and Helena, only too pleased to have got him

back again, did not, you may be sure, keep him waiting very long for her

pardon, and so they were married and returned to Helena's castle, where

they are no doubt still sitting happily together under the lime-tree.

Kletke.


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love, though tested by time and adversity, can ultimately be rekindled and triumph over fickleness.

Plot Summary

Fair Helena endures her cruel stepmother's impossible tasks, only to be secretly aided by a kind Fairy. After her stepmother's demise, Helena falls in love with Prince Fickle, who promises to return but abandons her. Heartbroken, she disguises herself as a herd-girl and years later, learns of his impending marriage. Helena attends his wedding feast for three nights, each time more splendidly dressed, until on the third night, a kiss on his left cheek rekindles his memory and their love, leading to their marriage and a happy reunion.

Themes

perseverancefidelitybetrayal and forgivenesstrue love's recognition

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, repetition (of the calf's rhyme), direct address to reader

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (Helena vs. Stepmother, Helena vs. Prince Fickle's fickleness)
Ending: happy
Magic: Fairy helper, Instantaneous sorting of feathers, Instantaneous emptying of a pond, Instantaneous construction and furnishing of a castle
The lime-tree (symbol of love and waiting)The left cheek kiss (symbol of recognition and a unique bond)The three dresses (symbol of Helena's true identity and beauty)The calf and its rhyme (symbol of Helena's enduring sorrow and subtle attempt to communicate)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common European fairy tale tropes of cruel stepmothers, magical helpers, and tests of fidelity, often set in a vaguely medieval or pre-industrial European context.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. Helena is cruelly treated by her stepmother, who sets her impossible tasks.
  2. A kind Fairy appears and helps Helena sort feathers, empty a pond, and build a castle.
  3. The stepmother dies in the castle, leaving Helena wealthy and independent.
  4. Prince Fickle woos Helena, and they fall in love; he promises to return after gaining his parents' consent, asking her to wait under a lime-tree.
  5. Helena kisses Prince Fickle's left cheek and asks him not to let anyone else kiss him there.
  6. Helena waits three days and nights under the lime-tree, but Prince Fickle does not return.
  7. Heartbroken, Helena takes her jewels and three special dresses, leaves her castle, and becomes a herd-girl in a distant land.
  8. Helena teaches a calf a rhyme lamenting Prince Fickle's unfaithfulness.
  9. Helena learns that Prince Fickle is to marry the king's daughter in the same country.
  10. Helena subtly tries to remind Prince Fickle of her by reciting the rhyme as he passes, but he doesn't fully recognize her.
  11. Helena attends the pre-wedding feast for three consecutive nights, each time wearing one of her magnificent dresses and dazzling Prince Fickle.
  12. On the third night, Helena kisses Prince Fickle on his left cheek.
  13. Prince Fickle recognizes Helena, is filled with remorse, and begs her forgiveness.
  14. Helena forgives him, and they marry and return to her castle, living happily ever after.

Characters 5 characters

Helena ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Beautiful, fair

Attire: Peasant's dress as a herd-girl, later dresses embroidered with suns, moons, and stars of gold and silver; jewels

Dress embroidered with golden suns

Kind, patient, resourceful

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A young woman in her early twenties with a determined yet kind expression, standing tall with confident posture. She has long, flowing chestnut hair loosely braided with a few wildflowers tucked in. She wears a practical yet elegant deep green velvet tunic over a cream-colored linen blouse, brown leather leggings, and sturdy traveling boots. A leather satchel is slung over her shoulder, and a simple silver pendant rests at her collar. Her hand rests lightly on the hilt of a sheathed dagger at her belt. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Stepmother ⚔ antagonist

human adult female

Not described

Attire: Implied to be well-dressed, befitting her status

Stern expression, descending cellar stairs

Cruel, unkind, evil

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A middle-aged woman with a severe, elegant appearance, sharp cheekbones, and cold, calculating eyes. She has tightly pulled-back black hair under a structured, dark velvet headdress. She wears a high-collared, form-fitting gown of deep burgundy brocade with rigid shoulders and tight sleeves, adorned with minimal but expensive-looking jet beading. Her posture is rigid and upright, one hand resting on her hip, the other holding a closed fan. Her expression is a thin, condescending smile, looking down her nose. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Fairy ◆ supporting

magical creature ageless female

Not described

Attire: Not described

Glowing presence, appearing suddenly

Kind, helpful, magical

Image Prompt & Upload
A young woman with an ethereal appearance, appearing to be in her early twenties, with long, flowing silver hair adorned with tiny glowing blossoms. She has large, luminous blue eyes and a gentle, supportive smile. She is wearing a delicate, layered dress made of soft pastel green and white petals that seem to shimmer with a faint inner light. Her posture is graceful and welcoming, with one hand extended slightly forward as if offering help. She is barefoot, with delicate, translucent wings folded neatly on her back. In her other hand, she gently holds a small, glowing bluebird perched on her finger. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Prince Fickle ◆ supporting

human young adult male

Not described

Attire: Princely attire, appropriate for travel and formal occasions

Kissed on the left cheek

Fickle, easily distracted, remorseful

Image Prompt & Upload
A youthful prince in his late teens with a handsome, indecisive expression, slight furrow in his brow. He has wavy, honey-blond hair and a lean build. He is dressed in a royal doublet of deep emerald green velvet with gold embroidery at the collar and cuffs, paired with cream-colored hose and polished brown leather boots. His posture is slightly slouched, one hand adjusting the cuff of his sleeve while the other rests on the pommel of a sheathed dagger at his hip. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Little Calf ◆ supporting

animal child unknown

Small, young calf

Kneeling before Helena

Docile, affectionate, trained

Image Prompt & Upload
A young, small calf with soft, velvety brown fur and large, gentle, dark eyes. It has a friendly, curious expression with a slight smile. A simple, small brass bell hangs from a thin leather strap around its neck. It stands calmly on all fours in a relaxed, attentive posture. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 5 locations
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Helena's Cottage

indoor

A humble dwelling where Helena is forced to complete impossible tasks by her cruel stepmother.

Mood: oppressive, sorrowful

Helena is given impossible tasks and is aided by the Fairy.

mixed feathers spoon full of holes dark corners dusty shelves
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A small, dilapidated cottage with a sagging, thatched roof and crumbling stone walls sits in a desolate clearing. The weathered wooden door is slightly ajar, revealing deep shadows within. A barren, weed-choked garden surrounds the structure, with a single, gnarled apple tree casting long, skeletal branches. The sky is a bruised twilight purple and orange, casting long, dramatic shadows. The atmosphere is oppressive and lonely, with a cold wind rustling dry leaves. The lighting is dim and harsh, emphasizing the peeling paint and neglect. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Pond near the house

outdoor day

A small body of water that Helena is tasked with emptying using a spoon full of holes.

Mood: despairing, hopeless

Helena attempts to empty the pond and is aided by the Fairy.

water lilies muddy banks leaking spoon burdock leaves
Image Prompt & Upload
A small, serene pond in a quiet clearing at early dawn, its surface like glass reflecting the soft pastel sky. A rustic, thatched-roof cottage with a stone foundation sits nearby, its windows dark. Weeping willows trail delicate branches into the water, and clusters of cattails and wild irises grow along the muddy banks. A weathered wooden bucket and a dented tin spoon lie forgotten on the grass. The air is cool and misty, with golden light beginning to filter through the trees, casting long shadows and making the dew on the grass sparkle. The scene is peaceful, still, and slightly magical. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Beautiful Castle

outdoor dusk

A magnificent castle built by the Fairy overnight, fully furnished from garret to basement.

Mood: magical, peaceful

Helena becomes mistress of the castle after her stepmother's death.

steep stairs cellars furnished rooms high towers
Image Prompt & Upload
At twilight, a magnificent castle of pale stone and iridescent crystal spires rises from a misty forest clearing. Soft, warm light glows from countless arched windows, illuminating intricate fairy-made tapestries and gilded furniture within. The architecture is elegant and impossible, with flying buttresses, delicate bridges, and balconies overflowing with luminous moonflowers. A gentle, magical mist swirls around the base, reflecting the castle's light. The surrounding ancient trees are draped with softly glowing lanterns, and the path is paved with smooth, glowing pebbles. The sky is a deep velvet blue with the first stars appearing, creating a scene of breathtaking, silent enchantment. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Lime-tree in front of the castle

outdoor

A shady spot where Helena and Prince Fickle spend happy hours together.

Mood: romantic, idyllic

Prince Fickle announces he must leave, and Helena waits for him.

gnarled roots fragrant blossoms sun-dappled shade stone benches
Image Prompt & Upload
Late afternoon golden hour, soft sunlight filtering through the sprawling, ancient lime tree, creating dappled patterns of light and shadow on the lush green grass. A grand, whimsical castle with tall turrets and ivy-covered stone walls rises in the background, its windows glinting warmly. The air is still and peaceful, with a few pink and white wildflowers dotting the grass beneath the tree. A weathered stone path leads from the tree toward the castle's arched entrance. Distant rolling hills under a soft, peach-tinted sky. No border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Royal Ballroom

indoor night

A grand ballroom where a feast is held, filled with guests and adorned with decorations.

Mood: festive, glittering

Helena appears in her star, moon, and sun dresses, and Prince Fickle recognizes her.

chandeliers dancing couples long tables ornate gowns
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A grand royal ballroom at dusk, bathed in the warm, golden light of crystal chandeliers suspended from a high, vaulted ceiling. Ornate walls feature intricate gilded moldings and deep crimson velvet drapes. Polished marble floors gleam, reflecting the glow. Long feast tables are laden with fine porcelain and silverware, surrounded by lavish floral centerpieces of roses and lilies. Garlands of ivy and twinkling fairy lights adorn the space, with tall candelabras casting soft shadows. The atmosphere is opulent and serene, highlighting the architectural splendor and festive decorations in rich reds, golds, and creams. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration