The Husband of the Rat's Daughter

by Andrew Lang · from The Brown Fairy Book

fairy tale moral tale humorous Ages 5-10 1040 words 5 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 343 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, a rat family lived in a hole. Papa Rat and Mama Rat had a daughter. Her name was Little Rat. She was very pretty and kind. They were a happy family.

"It is time for a husband," said Papa Rat. "I know a good rat," he said. "No," said Mama Rat. "I want someone bigger!" They talked and talked.

Mama Rat had a big idea. "We will find the greatest one!" she said. "The greatest, the best!" she cried. Little Rat said nothing.

They went to the Sun. "Hello, Sun," said Mama Rat. "Will you marry our Little Rat?" The Sun smiled. "I am big," said the Sun. "But the Cloud is bigger. He covers me up." The rats said, "Oh."

They went to the Cloud. "Hello, Cloud," said Mama Rat. "Will you marry our Little Rat?" The Cloud was soft. "I am big," said the Cloud. "But the Wind is bigger. He pushes me away." The rats said, "Oh."

They went to the Wind. "Whoosh!" went the Wind. "Hello, Wind," said Mama Rat. "Will you marry our Little Rat?" The Wind was fast. "I am big," said the Wind. "But the Wall is bigger. He stops me." The rats said, "Oh."

They went to the Wall. The Wall was old and kind. "Hello, Wall," said Mama Rat. "Will you marry our Little Rat?" Then Little Rat spoke. "No!" she said. "I will not marry the Wall. I love the handsome young rat! Only him!" She was very brave.

The Wall felt sad. "I am old," said the Wall. "But rats are greater than me. Rats can make holes in me. Rats are the greatest!" He was very kind.

"Ah!" said Papa Rat. "I was right!" Mama Rat was surprised. Then she smiled. "Yes! A rat is best!" she said. "A rat son-in-law is what I always wanted!" She was happy.

They all went home. Little Rat married her rat friend. They had a happy, happy wedding. Everyone smiled. Being yourself is the best. Rats are great! The end.

Original Story 1040 words · 5 min read

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The Husband of the Rat’s Daughter

Once upon a time there lived in Japan a rat and his wife who came of an

old and noble race, and had one daughter, the loveliest girl in all the

rat world. Her parents were very proud of her, and spared no pains to

teach her all she ought to know. There was not another young lady in

the whole town who was as clever as she was in gnawing through the

hardest wood, or who could drop from such a height on to a bed, or run

away so fast if anyone was heard coming. Great attention, too, was paid

to her personal appearance, and her skin shone like satin, while her

teeth were as white as pearls, and beautifully pointed.

Of course, with all these advantages, her parents expected her to make

a brilliant marriage, and, as she grew up, they began to look round for

a suitable husband.

But here a difficulty arose. The father was a rat from the tip of his

nose to the end of his tail, outside as well as in, and desired that

his daughter should wed among her own people. She had no lack of

lovers, but her father’s secret hopes rested on a fine young rat, with

moustaches which almost swept the ground, whose family was still nobler

and more ancient than his own. Unluckily, the mother had other views

for her precious child. She was one of those people who always despise

their own family and surroundings, and take pleasure in thinking that

they themselves are made of finer material than the rest of the world.

“HER daughter should never marry a mere rat,” she declared, holding her

head high. “With her beauty and talents she had a right to look for

someone a little better than THAT.”

So she talked, as mothers will, to anyone that would listen to her.

What the girl thought about the matter nobody knew or cared—it was not

the fashion in the rat world.

Many were the quarrels which the old rat and his wife had upon the

subject, and sometimes they bore on their faces certain marks which

looked as if they had not kept to words only.

“Reach up to the stars is MY motto,” cried the lady one day, when she

was in a greater passion than usual. “My daughter’s beauty places her

higher than anything upon earth,” she cried; “and I am certainly not

going to accept a son-in-law who is beneath her.”

“Better offer her in marriage to the sun,” answered her husband

impatiently. “As far as I know there is nothing greater than he.”

“Well, I WAS thinking of it,” replied the wife, “and as you are of the

same mind, we will pay him a visit to-morrow.”

So the next morning, the two rats, having spent hours in making

themselves smart, set out to see the sun, leading their daughter

between them.

The journey took some time, but at length they came to the golden

palace where the sun lived.

“Noble king,” began the mother, “behold our daughter! She is so

beautiful that she is above everything in the whole world. Naturally,

we wish for a son-in-law who, on his side, is greater than all.

Therefore we have come to you.”

“I feel very much flattered,” replied the sun, who was so busy that he

had not the least wish to marry anybody. “You do me great honour by

your proposal. Only, in one point you are mistaken, and it would be

wrong of me to take advantage of your ignorance. There is something

greater than I am, and that is the cloud. Look!” And as he spoke a

cloud spread itself over the sun’s face, blotting out his rays.

“Oh, well, we will speak to the cloud,” said the mother. And turning to

the cloud she repeated her proposal.

“Indeed I am unworthy of anything so charming,” answered the cloud;

“but you make a mistake again in what you say. There is one thing that

is even more powerful than I, and that is the wind. Ah, here he comes,

you can see for yourself.”

And she DID see, for catching up the cloud as he passed, he threw it on

the other side of the sky. Then, tumbling father, mother and daughter

down to the earth again, he paused for a moment beside them, his foot

on an old wall.

When she had recovered her breath, the mother began her little speech

once more.

“The wall is the proper husband for your daughter,” answered the wind,

whose home consisted of a cave, which he only visited when he was not

rushing about elsewhere; “you can see for yourself that he is greater

than I, for he has power to stop me in my flight.” And the mother, who

did not trouble to conceal her wishes, turned at once to the wall.

Then something happened which was quite unexpected by everyone.

“I won’t marry that ugly old wall, which is as old as my grandfather,”

sobbed the girl, who had not uttered one word all this time. “I would

have married the sun, or the cloud, or the wind, because it was my

duty, although I love the handsome young rat, and him only. But that

horrid old wall—I would sooner die!”

And the wall, rather hurt in his feelings, declared that he had no

claim to be the husband of so beautiful a girl.

“It is quite true,” he said, “that I can stop the wind who can part the

clouds who can cover the sun; but there is someone who can do more than

all these, and that is the rat. It is the rat who passes through me,

and can reduce me to powder, simply with his teeth. If, therefore, you

want a son-in-law who is greater than the whole world, seek him among

the rats.”

“Ah, what did I tell you?” cried the father. And his wife, though for

the moment angry at being beaten, soon thought that a rat son-in-law

was what she had always desired.

So all three returned happily home, and the wedding was celebrated

three days after.

[Contes Populaires.]


Story DNA fairy tale · humorous

Moral

True worth and power can be found in unexpected places, and one should not despise their own kind in pursuit of perceived greatness.

Plot Summary

A noble rat couple seeks a husband for their beautiful daughter. The mother, despising their own kind, insists on finding the 'greatest' being in the world, leading them to successively approach the Sun, Cloud, Wind, and Wall. Each powerful entity humbly admits that something else is greater. Finally, the daughter, who has been silent, refuses the Wall and confesses her love for a handsome young rat. The Wall then reveals that rats are, in fact, greater than he, as they can gnaw through him. The parents, now enlightened, return home, and the daughter marries the rat she loves.

Themes

humilitytrue worthparental expectationssocial climbing

Emotional Arc

pride to humility

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: anthropomorphism, rule of three (repeated attempts to find a husband)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (mother vs father, mother vs daughter's true feelings), person vs society (mother's disdain for her own kind)
Ending: happy
Magic: talking animals (rats), personification of natural elements (Sun, Cloud, Wind, Wall)
the Sun (ultimate power, initially perceived)the Wall (seemingly immovable, but vulnerable)the Rat (humble, yet possessing true, understated power)

Cultural Context

Origin: Japanese (as collected by Andrew Lang)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang was a Scottish poet, novelist, literary critic, and folklorist who collected and published fairy tales from various cultures in the late 19th and early 20th centuries. This particular tale is noted as 'Contes Populaires,' indicating a French source for a popular tale, likely a translation of a Japanese folk tale.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. A noble rat couple in Japan has a beautiful, talented daughter.
  2. The parents decide it's time for her to marry, but disagree on a suitable husband.
  3. The father wants her to marry a fine young rat, but the mother despises rats and wants a 'greater' son-in-law.
  4. The mother, convinced her daughter is above all, decides to seek the greatest being in the world as a husband.
  5. The parents, with their daughter, visit the Sun to propose marriage.
  6. The Sun declines, stating the Cloud is greater because it can block his light.
  7. The parents then approach the Cloud, who declines, stating the Wind is greater because it can move the cloud.
  8. The parents then approach the Wind, who declines, stating the Wall is greater because it can stop the wind.
  9. The mother turns to the Wall, but the daughter, for the first time, speaks up and refuses to marry the Wall, confessing her love for a handsome young rat.
  10. The Wall, feeling hurt, humbly admits that the rat is actually greater than he, as rats can gnaw through walls.
  11. The father exclaims he was right all along, and the mother, though initially annoyed, quickly agrees that a rat son-in-law is what she always wanted.
  12. The family returns home, and the daughter marries the handsome young rat she loves.

Characters 7 characters

Rat's Daughter ★ protagonist

rat young adult female

Lovelist girl in all the rat world, skin shone like satin, teeth white as pearls and beautifully pointed

Attire: Small silk kimono appropriate for a young lady of rank in rat society, tiny ornamental comb

Gleaming white teeth

Obedient, secretly romantic, ultimately assertive

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A young girl around ten years old with large, dark, intelligent eyes and a small, pointed nose. Her hair is a messy, dark brown bob with two tufts sticking up like ears. She has faint, delicate whiskers on her cheeks. She wears a simple, patched dress of rough, earthy brown fabric, cinched at the waist with a bit of rope. Her posture is slightly hunched, her hands clasped nervously in front of her, her expression a mix of wide-eyed curiosity and cautious alertness. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Rat Father ◆ supporting

rat adult male

A rat from the tip of his nose to the end of his tail

Attire: Formal rat attire, perhaps a small waistcoat and tie

Long, sweeping moustaches

Proud, traditional, easily overruled

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An elderly anthropomorphic rat with graying fur and kind, tired eyes. He wears a simple brown vest over a cream-colored shirt with the sleeves rolled up, and patched trousers held up by suspenders. He stands with a slightly stooped posture, gently cradling a small bundle of wrapped cheese wheels in his arms as if they were precious. His whiskers droop slightly, and he has a warm, gentle expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Rat Mother ◆ supporting

rat adult female

Believes herself to be made of finer material than the rest of the world

Attire: Elegant rat attire, perhaps a small hat or shawl

Head held high in disdain

Snobbish, ambitious, domineering

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A middle-aged woman with kind, crinkled eyes and a warm, gentle smile. Her hair is a soft brown, streaked with silver, pulled back in a practical bun. She wears a simple, long-sleeved dress of faded rose-colored linen with a sturdy brown apron tied at the waist. Her posture is slightly bent forward, one hand extended in a welcoming, helping gesture, the other holding a small, woven basket. Two small, friendly rats peek from the folds of her apron. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sun ○ minor

celestial body ageless unknown

Golden palace

Blinding golden rays

Busy, diplomatic, honest

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A young child around eight years old with a warm, radiant complexion and golden-brown skin. Their hair is a brilliant sunflower yellow, styled in short, fluffy curls that seem to glow with inner light. They have bright amber eyes and a joyful, beaming smile. They wear a simple tunic of pale gold linen, embroidered with tiny orange sun motifs along the hems, with a sash of deep saffron tied at the waist. On their feet are soft, sun-colored leather sandals. The child stands with arms slightly outstretched, palms facing upward as if offering light, posture energetic and welcoming. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Cloud ○ minor

weather phenomenon ageless unknown

Spreads itself over the sun's face

Opaque, grey form obscuring the sun

Humble, yielding

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A young boy with a soft, dreamy expression, appearing around ten years old. He has fluffy, pale silver-white hair that floats slightly as if weightless. He wears a simple, oversized tunic of soft white linen with a pale blue sash, and loose trousers. His posture is relaxed, one hand gently outstretched as if touching a wisp of vapor. He stands barefoot on a faint, translucent cloud. Ethereal, soft lighting. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Wind ○ minor

weather phenomenon ageless unknown

Rushing about

Swirling gusts of air

Powerful, restless

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A young child of about eight years old with an ethereal, translucent quality to their skin. They have wild, flowing hair the color of pale silver that whips around their head as if caught in a constant breeze. Their eyes are a clear, pale blue, wide with wonder. They wear a simple tunic and leggings made of a sheer, gossamer fabric that ripples and flows like mist. Their pose is light and airy, standing on tiptoe with arms slightly outstretched, fingers trailing through invisible currents. Their expression is one of serene joy. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Wall ○ minor

object elderly unknown

Ugly and old

Ancient, crumbling stone

Hurt, honest, self-deprecating

Image Prompt & Upload
A 10-year-old boy with a round face and short, tousled brown hair. He wears a simple, faded blue t-shirt and khaki shorts. His posture is relaxed, standing with his hands in his pockets and a neutral, curious expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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Rat Family Home

indoor

A home of a noble rat family in Japan, well-maintained and comfortable.

Mood: Warm, secure, domestic

Introduction of the rat family and their daughter; initial conflict about finding a suitable husband.

hard wood bed satin-like skin pearl-white teeth
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Evening light filters through paper screens onto polished wooden floors in a cozy, miniature Japanese home. The well-maintained interior features sliding doors, woven tatami mats, and a tiny, immaculate alcove with a hanging scroll. Soft lantern glow illuminates a small, perfectly raked zen garden visible through an open shoji screen, with moss-covered stones and a single cherry blossom branch. Warm, earthy tones of wood and paper dominate, with accents of green from the garden. The atmosphere is serene, tidy, and comfortably lived-in. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Golden Palace of the Sun

outdoor morning Implied sunny weather

A radiant palace where the sun resides, presumably high in the sky.

Mood: Bright, powerful, imposing

The rat family proposes their daughter to the sun, who redirects them to the cloud.

golden palace sun's rays
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A celestial palace of pure gold and light, floating amidst a vast expanse of soft, sun-kissed clouds at high noon. The architecture features towering spires, grand domes, and sweeping arches, all constructed from a luminous, glowing metal that radiates a warm, amber light. Crystalline windows shimmer with captured sunlight, casting prismatic reflections onto the surrounding cloud banks. The air itself appears to sparkle with golden dust motes. Intense, direct sunlight bathes the entire scene, creating sharp, bright highlights and deep, warm shadows on the intricate facades. Below the palace, the clouds form a majestic, rolling landscape of white and gold, with sunbeams piercing through gaps in divine rays. The atmosphere is one of divine majesty, serene and overwhelmingly radiant. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Beside the Old Wall

transitional afternoon

An old, weathered wall on the earth, where the wind pauses.

Mood: Exposed, weathered, somewhat desolate

The wind tumbles the rat family to the earth and suggests the wall as a husband; the daughter refuses.

old wall earth wind
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Late afternoon golden light filters through a hazy sky, illuminating a vast, silent meadow. In the center stands an ancient, crumbling stone wall, its surface thick with emerald moss and weathered to a soft grey. The air is perfectly still, as if holding its breath. Wildflowers—pale lavender and dusty pink—bloom in clusters at the wall's base, their stems motionless. Tall, dry grass surrounds the scene, each blade frozen in the calm. The light casts long, gentle shadows, highlighting the intricate textures of the old stones and the soft, earthy tones of the landscape. The atmosphere is profoundly peaceful and timeless. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration