The Bunyip

by Andrew Lang · from The Brown Fairy Book

folk tale cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 1271 words 6 min read
Cover: The Bunyip

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 310 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, some boys went to find food. They were lazy. They did not want to work hard. They wanted to fish for fun. They walked to the river. The sun was warm.

One boy used meat for his hook. He did not tell his friends. He threw his line in the water. He waited quietly. The water was still.

He felt a strong pull. It was very heavy. His friends came to help him. They pulled and pulled together. Their arms were tired.

They saw a baby Bunyip. It was small and scared. Its eyes were wide. The boy wanted to keep it. He thought it was cute.

The mother Bunyip came. She made sad sounds. She wanted her baby back. She looked at the boy. Her sounds were low.

The boy did not listen. He ignored her cries. He ran away with the baby. He held it tight. His friends followed him.

A big wave of water came. It followed them fast. The water was angry. It made a loud sound. The ground got wet.

They ran fast to their camp. The water followed them. It came very close. They were very scared. Their hearts beat fast.

The water came to the camp. Everyone was surprised. They were all very scared. The water was everywhere. It was cold.

The boy tried to save the girl. He held her hand. They started to change. They began to change into birds. Their arms became wings.

They became black swans. They could not be boys again. They flew away. They went into the sky. They were quiet.

The mother Bunyip found her baby. She was happy. She made soft sounds. The water went away. The ground was dry.

The boys were swans now. They lived by the water. This is why we must be kind to animals and nature.

Original Story 1271 words · 6 min read

Cover

The Bunyip

Long, long ago, far, far away on the other side of the world, some

young men left the camp where they lived to get some food for their

wives and children. The sun was hot, but they liked heat, and as they

went they ran races and tried who could hurl his spear the farthest, or

was cleverest in throwing a strange weapon called a boomerang, which

always returns to the thrower. They did not get on very fast at this

rate, but presently they reached a flat place that in time of flood was

full of water, but was now, in the height of summer, only a set of

pools, each surrounded with a fringe of plants, with bulrushes standing

in the inside of all. In that country the people are fond of the roots

of bulrushes, which they think as good as onions, and one of the young

men said that they had better collect some of the roots and carry them

back to the camp. It did not take them long to weave the tops of the

willows into a basket, and they were just going to wade into the water

and pull up the bulrush roots when a youth suddenly called out: “After

all, why should we waste our time in doing work that is only fit for

women and children? Let them come and get the roots for themselves; but

we will fish for eels and anything else we can get.”

This delighted the rest of the party, and they all began to arrange

their fishing lines, made from the bark of the yellow mimosa, and to

search for bait for their hooks. Most of them used worms, but one, who

had put a piece of raw meat for dinner into his skin wallet, cut off a

little bit and baited his line with it, unseen by his companions.

For a long time they cast patiently, without receiving a single bite;

the sun had grown low in the sky, and it seemed as if they would have

to go home empty-handed, not even with a basket of roots to show; when

the youth, who had baited his hook with raw meat, suddenly saw his line

disappear under the water. Something, a very heavy fish he supposed,

was pulling so hard that he could hardly keep his feet, and for a few

minutes it seemed either as if he must let go or be dragged into the

pool. He cried to his friends to help him, and at last, trembling with

fright at what they were going to see, they managed between them to

land on the bank a creature that was neither a calf nor a seal, but

something of both, with a long, broad tail. They looked at each other

with horror, cold shivers running down their spines; for though they

had never beheld it, there was not a man amongst them who did not know

what it was—the cub of the awful Bunyip!

All of a sudden the silence was broken by a low wail, answered by

another from the other side of the pool, as the mother rose up from her

den and came towards them, rage flashing from her horrible yellow eyes.

“Let it go! let it go!” whispered the young men to each other; but the

captor declared that he had caught it, and was going to keep it. “He

had promised his sweetheart,” he said, “that he would bring back enough

meat for her father’s house to feast on for three days, and though they

could not eat the little Bunyip, her brothers and sisters should have

it to play with.” So, flinging his spear at the mother to keep her

back, he threw the little Bunyip on to his shoulders, and set out for

the camp, never heeding the poor mother’s cries of distress.

By this time it was getting near sunset, and the plain was in shadow,

though the tops of the mountains were still quite bright. The youths

had all ceased to be afraid, when they were startled by a low rushing

sound behind them, and, looking round, saw that the pool was slowly

rising, and the spot where they had landed the Bunyip was quite

covered. “What could it be?” they asked one of another; “there was not

a cloud in the sky, yet the water had risen higher already than they

had ever known it do before.” For an instant they stood watching as if

they were frozen, then they turned and ran with all their might, the

man with the Bunyip running faster than all. When he reached a high

peak over-looking all the plain he stopped to take breath, and turned

to see if he was safe yet. Safe! why only the tops of the trees

remained above that sea of water, and these were fast disappearing.

They must run fast indeed if they were to escape. So on they flew,

scarcely feeling the ground as they went, till they flung themselves on

the ground before the holes scooped out of the earth where they had all

been born. The old men were sitting in front, the children were

playing, and the women chattering together, when the little Bunyip fell

into their midst, and there was scarcely a child among them who did not

know that something terrible was upon them. “The water! the water!”

gasped one of the young men; and there it was, slowly but steadily

mounting the ridge itself. Parents and children clung together, as if

by that means they could drive back the advancing flood; and the youth

who had caused all this terrible catastrophe, seized his sweetheart,

and cried: “I will climb with you to the top of that tree, and there no

waters can reach us.” But, as he spoke, something cold touched him, and

quickly he glanced down at his feet. Then with a shudder he saw that

they were feet no longer, but bird’s claws. He looked at the girl he

was clasping, and beheld a great black bird standing at his side; he

turned to his friends, but a flock of great awkward flapping creatures

stood in their place He put up his hands to cover his face, but they

were no more hands, only the ends of wings; and when he tried to speak,

a noise such as he had never heard before seemed to come from his

throat, which had suddenly become narrow and slender. Already the water

had risen to his waist, and he found himself sitting easily upon it,

while its surface reflected back the image of a black swan, one of

many.

Never again did the swans become men; but they are still different from

other swans, for in the night-time those who listen can hear them talk

in a language that is certainly not swan’s language; and there are even

sounds of laughing and talking, unlike any noise made by the swans whom

we know.

The little Bunyip was carried home by its mother, and after that the

waters sank back to their own channels. The side of the pool where she

lives is always shunned by everyone, as nobody knows when she may

suddenly put out her head and draw him into her mighty jaws. But people

say that underneath the black waters of the pool she has a house filled

with beautiful things, such as mortals who dwell on the earth have no

idea of. Though how they know I cannot tell you, as nobody has ever

seen it.

[From Journal of Anthropological-Institute.]


Story DNA folk tale · solemn

Moral

Disrespecting nature and its creatures, especially for selfish gain, can lead to severe and irreversible consequences.

Plot Summary

A group of young men, shirking work, catch a Bunyip cub. One youth refuses to release it despite the mother's distress, even attacking her. As they return to camp, a mysterious flood rises and pursues them. The flood engulfs their camp, and the cruel youth and his companions are transformed into black swans as punishment. The Bunyip mother retrieves her cub, the waters recede, and the swans are forever marked by their past, while the Bunyip's pool remains a place of fear and mystery.

Themes

disrespect for natureconsequences of greed/selfishnesstransformationretribution

Emotional Arc

carefree to terror to despair

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (three days of feasting), direct address to reader (Though how they know I cannot tell you), mythological explanation for natural phenomena

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural | person vs nature | person vs self (greed)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: Bunyip (mythical creature), magical, sudden flood, human-to-animal transformation
the Bunyip cub (innocence, nature's vulnerability)the flood (nature's wrath, divine/supernatural retribution)black swans (eternal punishment, loss of humanity)

Cultural Context

Origin: Australian Aboriginal (as retold by Andrew Lang)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang was a Scottish poet, novelist, and literary critic, known for collecting and retelling fairy tales from various cultures in his 'Fairy Books' series. This story is presented as an Aboriginal legend, reflecting early European attempts to document indigenous folklore, though often with their own interpretations.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. Young men leave camp to gather food, but decide to fish instead of collecting bulrush roots, deeming it 'women's work'.
  2. One youth baits his line with raw meat, secretly from his companions.
  3. He catches a heavy creature, which his friends help him land, recognizing it as a Bunyip cub.
  4. The mother Bunyip appears, wailing, but the youth refuses to release the cub, intending to keep it as a trophy and for his sweetheart.
  5. He throws a spear at the mother and carries the cub away towards the camp.
  6. A mysterious flood begins to rise rapidly, following the men.
  7. The men run back to their camp, the flood relentlessly pursuing them.
  8. The flood reaches the camp, terrifying the families.
  9. The youth tries to save his sweetheart by climbing a tree, but he and his companions begin to transform into black swans.
  10. The transformation is complete; they are now black swans, unable to speak or act as men.
  11. The Bunyip mother retrieves her cub from the floodwaters.
  12. The floodwaters recede, leaving the transformed men as swans.
  13. The swans retain a human-like language at night, and the Bunyip's pool remains a feared and mysterious place.

Characters 5 characters

The Youth ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Strong, athletic, skilled with spears and boomerangs

Attire: Simple loincloth or wrap made of animal skin, possibly adorned with feathers or beads

Holding the captured baby Bunyip on his shoulders

Impulsive, boastful, selfish

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A young man in his late teens with a determined expression, standing tall and ready for adventure. He has tousled, sun-streaked brown hair and warm, focused brown eyes. He wears a simple, earth-toned tunic over dark trousers, sturdy leather boots, and a weathered green cloak fastened with a bronze clasp. A leather satchel is slung over his shoulder, and his hand rests lightly on the hilt of a simple shortsword at his belt. His posture is confident yet slightly weary, suggesting a long journey ahead. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Bunyip Mother ⚔ antagonist

magical creature adult female

A creature that was neither a calf nor a seal, but something of both, with a long, broad tail, horrible yellow eyes

Rising from the pool with rage flashing from her yellow eyes

Protective, vengeful, powerful

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An ancient, amphibious creature with mottled grey-green skin, webbed claws, and a long serpentine neck. Her face is a grotesque blend of crocodile and eel, with milky, pupil-less eyes and a wide mouth of needle-like teeth. She wears ragged, seaweed-draped garments that cling to her hunched, powerful form. She stands in a protective, crouching posture over a nest of murky, oversized eggs, one clawed hand extended in a warding gesture. Murky swamp water licks at her feet, with twisted roots and fog in the background. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Little Bunyip ○ minor

magical creature child unknown

Neither a calf nor a seal, but something of both, with a long, broad tail

Small, strange creature being carried away

Vulnerable, helpless

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A small, youthful swamp creature with smooth, mottled green-grey skin and large, curious amber eyes. It has a rounded, amphibious head with a short snout, small webbed hands and feet, and a long, tapering tail. Patches of iridescent scales shimmer on its shoulders and back. It wears a simple harness woven from reeds and adorned with a single freshwater pearl. Its posture is slightly crouched, leaning forward with a playful, inquisitive expression, one webbed hand extended as if reaching for something. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Sweetheart ◆ supporting

human young adult female

Likely attractive to the Youth, healthy

Attire: Simple dress made of woven plant fibers or animal skin, adorned with natural elements

Transforming into a black swan beside the Youth

Trusting, dependent

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A young woman in her late teens with a kind, round face and gentle brown eyes. Her chestnut hair is tied in a loose braid over one shoulder, with a few soft curls framing her face. She wears a simple, sky-blue cotton dress with puffed sleeves and a white apron tied at the waist. She is kneeling on one knee, her posture open and welcoming, with one hand extended palm-up as if offering help or a small gift. Her expression is warm and slightly hopeful, with a soft smile. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Other Youths ◆ supporting

human young adult male

Strong, athletic

Attire: Simple loincloths or wraps made of animal skin

Transforming into awkward, flapping creatures

Easily swayed, fearful

Image Prompt & Upload
A group of five young people in their late teens, standing together in a loose cluster. They have varied appearances: one with curly auburn hair and a freckled nose wearing a linen tunic, another with straight black hair in a braid over a woolen vest, a third with short blond hair and a determined expression in a leather jerkin, a fourth with long brown hair peeking from under a hooded cloak, and the last with dark skin and close-cropped hair in a simple peasant blouse and trousers. Their clothing is practical and earth-toned, suggesting rural or humble origins. They stand with postures ranging from curious to slightly wary, looking slightly off-center as if listening to someone just out of view. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Flat plain with pools

outdoor afternoon Summer, hot

A flat area that floods seasonally, now in summer with scattered pools fringed with plants and bulrushes.

Mood: Initially peaceful and abundant, later menacing and dangerous

The young men catch the baby Bunyip, enraging the mother and triggering the flood.

pools of water bulrushes fringe of plants fishing lines raw meat bait
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Golden hour over a vast, flat plain flooded with shallow seasonal pools. The sky is a gradient of warm peach and soft lavender, with scattered wispy clouds. Reflecting the sky, the still water glows amber, edged with lush green sedges, tall bulrushes, and clusters of yellow wildflowers. The distant horizon is a low, hazy line of willows. Soft light illuminates every ripple and reed, casting long, gentle shadows across the waterlogged earth. A serene, expansive landscape with a tranquil, summer atmosphere. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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High peak overlooking the plain

outdoor dusk Summer, turning to evening

A high point offering a panoramic view of the now-flooded plain.

Mood: Desperate, hopeless, terrifying

The young men realize the extent of the flood and the imminent danger.

treetops visible above the water vast expanse of water mountains in the distance setting sun
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At sunset, a high rocky peak overlooks a panoramic view of a now-flooded plain. The sky is a gradient of orange, pink, and purple with scattered clouds. The flooded plain below is a vast expanse of calm water, reflecting the sunset colors, with distant mountain ranges visible on the horizon. Mist gently rises from the water, and the peak has sparse green vegetation and exposed rock. The lighting is warm and golden, creating a serene and majestic atmosphere. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Camp/Village

outdoor dusk Summer, turning to evening

Holes scooped out of the earth, where the people live. Located on a ridge.

Mood: Initially peaceful and communal, then filled with dread and chaos

The flood engulfs the camp, and the young men are transformed into black swans.

earth holes old men sitting in front playing children chattering women advancing flood waters
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At dusk, a cluster of earthen dwellings is carved into the side of a high, grassy ridge. The homes are smooth, hollowed-out mounds with rounded doorways and windows, glowing with warm amber light from within. The sky is a gradient of deep indigo and burnt orange, with the first stars appearing. Weathered paths wind between the mounds, and tufts of dry grass sway in a gentle breeze. The ridge overlooks a vast, misty valley under the fading light. The architecture is organic, blending seamlessly into the terrain. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Bunyip's Pool

outdoor

A dark pool of water, the home of the Bunyip.

Mood: Eerie, mysterious, dangerous

The Bunyip returns home with her cub, and the pool is forever feared.

black water hidden den unknown depths surrounding plants
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Late afternoon light filters weakly through a dense canopy of ancient, gnarled trees, casting long shadows over a deep, murky pool. The water is an inky black-blue, perfectly still except for a single, slow ripple expanding from its center. Twisted roots and moss-covered stones line the steep banks, disappearing into the dark water. The air is thick with mist and the deep, cool colors of twilight. An eerie, silent atmosphere hangs over the scene, suggesting a hidden, ancient presence just beneath the surface. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration